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Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review

Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com> Wed, 17 May 2023 03:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review
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Hi Lynne,

Approve the current document. Thanks a lot for your supporting.

BR/Hongji

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From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> 
Sent: Tuesday, May 16, 2023 9:35 AM
To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review

Hi, Hongji.

Thank you for spotting that the document title in the module needed updating -- good catch!  We have updated accordingly:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.xml
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-rfcdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-lastdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-lastrfcdiff.html

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-xmldiff1.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-xmldiff2.html

Please let us know whether you approve the document in its current form or further changes are needed.

Thanks again!

RFC Editor/lb

> On May 11, 2023, at 7:20 PM, Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Lynne,
> 
> I reviewed the whole document again and find one more place needs to be updated.  After it is fixed, I think it is ready to approve. Thanks a lot. 
> 
> OLD:
> revision 2023-04-25 {
>       description
>         "Initial revision.";
>       reference
>         "RFC 9398: A YANG Data Model for IGMP and Multicast Listener
>          Discovery (MLD) Proxy Devices";
>     }
> 
> NEW:
> revision 2023-04-25 {
>       description
>         "Initial revision.";
>       reference
>         "RFC 9398: A YANG Data Model for Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener
>          Discovery (MLD) Proxy Devices";
>     }
> 
> 
> BR/Hongji
> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> 
> Sent: Friday, May 12, 2023 5:46 AM
> To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; pim-ads@ietf.org; pim-chairs@ietf.org; stig@venaas.com; aretana.ietf@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com; liuyisong@chinamobile.com; mapancha@cisco.com; sivakumar.mahesh@gmail.com
> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review
> 
> Hi, Hongji.
> 
> We have updated your address per your note below.
> 
> The latest files are posted here:
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.txt
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.pdf
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.xml
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-rfcdiff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-auth48diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-lastdiff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-lastrfcdiff.html
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-xmldiff1.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-xmldiff2.html
> 
> Thank you!
> 
> RFC Editor/lb
> 
> 
>

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