Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review
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Hi Lynne,

I reviewed the whole document again and find one more place needs to be updated.  After it is fixed, I think it is ready to approve. Thanks a lot. 

OLD:
revision 2023-04-25 {
       description
         "Initial revision.";
       reference
         "RFC 9398: A YANG Data Model for IGMP and Multicast Listener
          Discovery (MLD) Proxy Devices";
     }

NEW:
revision 2023-04-25 {
       description
         "Initial revision.";
       reference
         "RFC 9398: A YANG Data Model for Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener
          Discovery (MLD) Proxy Devices";
     }


BR/Hongji



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From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> 
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To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review

Hi, Hongji.

We have updated your address per your note below.

The latest files are posted here:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398.xml
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-rfcdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-lastdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-lastrfcdiff.html

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-xmldiff1.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-xmldiff2.html

Thank you!

RFC Editor/lb