Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review
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Hi, Thanks a lot for your comments. Please check my reply inline. BR/Hongji -----Original Message----- From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Sent: Thursday, April 27, 2023 8:34 AM To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>; xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com; liuyisong@chinamobile.com; mapancha@cisco.com; sivakumar.mahesh@gmail.com Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; pim-ads@ietf.org; pim-chairs@ietf.org; stig@venaas.com; aretana.ietf@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9398 <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-10> for your review Authors and *AD, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. *AD, please review question #7 and let us know if the current text is approved or if further changes are needed. 1) <!-- [rfced] We updated the document title as follows. Please let us know any objections. Original: A YANG Data Model for IGMP/MLD Proxy Currently: A YANG Data Model for IGMP and Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) Proxy Devices --> [Authors] Maybe it is better to add full name of IGMP. A YANG Data Model for Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) Proxy Devices 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in the title) for use on <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search>. --> [Authors] IGMP Proxy, MLD Proxy, YANG 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1.3: This sentence was difficult to follow. We updated it per RFC 9128. Please let us know any objections. Original: In this document, names of data nodes, and other data model objects are often used without a prefix, as long as it is clear from the context in which YANG module each name is defined. Currently: In this document, names of data nodes and other data model objects are often used without a prefix, as long as the context clearly indicates the YANG module in which each name is defined. --> [Authors] ok 4) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following question and comment about the YANG module in Section 4. a) Note that the YANG module has been updated per the formatting option of pyang. Please review the diff file of the YANG module at "https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9398-ietf-igmp-mld-proxy-rfcdiff.html" and let us know any concerns. [Authors] ok b) FYI: There were 2 lines greater than 72 characters in the module, so we updated the text as follows to make it fit within the limit (note that there are two instances). Original: when "derived-from-or-self(rt:type, 'igmp-mld-proxy:igmp-proxy')" { Current: when "derived-from-or-self(rt:type, " + "'igmp-mld-proxy:mld-proxy')" { --> [Authors] ok 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 4: a) Please clarify the meaning of "under interface view". Original: description "Config attributes under interface view"; [Authors] The grouping per-interface-config-attributes is used in the interface list. From the yang tree view, it is indented to interface. b) We do not see "source-list" used anywhere else in this document. The only RFC we could find that defines "source-list" is RFC 4045, which does not appear to be applicable to this document. Is it possible that "source-list" should be "source-address" as used in this document? If not, will "source-list" be clear to readers? Original: enum "include" { description "In include mode, reception of packets sent to the specified multicast address is requested only from those IP source addresses listed in the source-list parameter"; } enum "exclude" { description "In exclude mode, reception of packets sent to the given multicast address is requested from all IP source addresses except those listed in the source-list parameter."; [Authors] The source-list means not only one source address, so maybe using souce-list is better. c) Are some words missing from these two description clauses? If the suggested text is not correct, please clarify "membership information that joined on the interface". Original: description "Multicast group membership information that joined on the interface."; ... description "Multicast group membership information that joined on the interface."; Suggested: description "Information regarding multicast groups permitted to connect to the interface."; ... description "Information regarding multicast groups permitted to connect to the interface."; --> [Authors] Maybe the suggested text is not correct. The list group contains group-addresses attached under the interface and all the other related information with the group-address, which including up-time, filter-mode, source. The description of list group needs to contain the information above. 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 5: We find this entry a bit difficult to follow. As it appears to indicate that two parameters are listed below the "Under ..." line, may we add a vertical space to make this information easier to read? Original: Under /rt:routing/rt:control-plane-protocols/rt:control-plane-protocol:/ igmp-mld-proxy:igmp-proxy igmp-mld-proxy:mld-proxy Suggested: Under /rt:routing/rt:control-plane-protocols/rt:control-plane-protocol:/ igmp-mld-proxy:igmp-proxy igmp-mld-proxy:mld-proxy --> [Authors] ok 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 5: Authors and *[AD]: It appears that this document does not define any RPC operations (as mentioned on <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines>), but please confirm. --> 8) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.2: The "YANG Module Names" registry is defined in RFC 6020 and not in RFC 7950. Please see Section 14 of RFC 6020 (https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc6020) and <https://www.iana.org/assignments/yang-parameters/> if you have any questions regarding this update. Original: This document registers the following YANG modules in the YANG Module Names registry [RFC7950]: Currently: This document registers the following YANG module in the "YANG Module Names" registry [RFC6020]: --> [Authors] RFC6020 defines YANG, and RFC7950 defines YANG 1.1. I saw the section 6.2 of RFC9166 cites RFC7950. Maybe both of them are ok? 9) <!-- [rfced] Informative References: RFC 8407 is not cited anywhere in this document. Please let us know where it should be cited. Original: [RFC8407] A. Bierman, "Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models", RFC 8407, October 2018. --> [Authors] You can remove it. Thanks. 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide at <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>, and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> [Authors] ok 11) <!-- [rfced] The following term was used inconsistently in this document. We chose to use the latter form. Please let us know any objections. proxy / Proxy (per more frequent usage in this document) --> [Authors] ok Thank you. RFC Editor/lb/kc On Apr 26, 2023, at 5:31 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: *****IMPORTANT***** Updated 2023/04/26 RFC Author(s): -------------- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. If an author is no longer available, there are several remedies available as listed in the FAQ (https://www.rfc-editor.org/faq/). You and you coauthors are responsible for engaging other parties (e.g., Contributors or Working Group) as necessary before providing your approval. 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