Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
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Dear Peter and Italo,

We have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9270

As we now have all approvals, we will prepare this document for publication shortly.

Thank you!

RFC Editor/lb

> From: Italo Busi <Italo.Busi@huawei.com>
> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
> Date: August 9, 2022 at 12:19:04 AM PDT
> To: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>, "Hejia (Jia)" <hejia@huawei.com>, 윤빈영 <byyun@etri.re.kr>, "peter.park@kt.com" <peter.park@kt.com>
> Cc: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>, Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr>, "teas-ads@ietf.org" <teas-ads@ietf.org>, RFC System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "teas-chairs@ietf.org" <teas-chairs@ietf.org>, Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vbeeram@juniper.net>, "auth48archive@rfc-editor.org" <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> 
> Hi Lynne
> 
> I approve the document for publication in its current form.
> 
> Thanks, Italo


> On Aug 8, 2022, at 4:17 PM, 박춘걸(AI Managed Service Projec) <peter.park@kt.com> wrote:
> 
> Dear Lynne,
> 
> Thank you for all the contributions on this document.
> I have a confirmation on this document ready for publication.
> 
> Best regards,
> Peter.
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: byyun@etri.re.kr <byyun@etri.re.kr> 
> Sent: Monday, August 8, 2022 9:36 PM
> To: 'Lynne Bartholomew' <lbartholomew@amsl.com>; hejia@huawei.com; italo.busi@huawei.com; 박춘걸(AI Managed Service Projec) <peter.park@kt.com>
> Cc: 'John Scudder' <jgs@juniper.net>; 'Jeong-dong Ryoo' <ryoo@etri.re.kr>; teas-ads@ietf.org; 'RFC System' <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; teas-chairs@ietf.org; 'Vishnu Pavan Beeram' <vbeeram@juniper.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
> 
> Dear Lynne,
> 
> I approve the document for publication in its current form.
> Thanks for your hard work.
> 
> 
> Regards,
> Bin
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lynne Bartholomew <>
> Sent: Saturday, August 6, 2022 4:05 AM
> To: hejia@huawei.com; italo.busi@huawei.com; 윤빈영 <byyun@etri.re.kr>; peter.park@kt.com
> Cc: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>; Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr>; teas-ads@ietf.org; RFC System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; teas-chairs@ietf.org; Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vbeeram@juniper.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
> 
> Dear Jia, Italo, Bin, and Peter,
> 
> We do not believe that we have heard from you regarding this document's readiness for publication.
> 
> Please review the updated files, and let us know whether further changes are needed or you approve the document for publication in its current form.
> 
> The latest files are posted here:
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.txt
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.pdf
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.xml
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-alt-diff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-rfcdiff.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-auth48diff.html
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-xmldiff1.html
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-xmldiff2.html
> 
> The AUTH48 status page is here:
> 
>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9270
> 
> Thank you!
> 
> RFC Editor/lb
> 
>> On Jul 22, 2022, at 2:17 PM, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi, John.  We have noted your approval:
>> 
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9270
>> 
>> Thank you!
>> 
>> RFC Editor/lb
>> 
>>> On Jul 21, 2022, at 8:29 AM, John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Lynne,
>>> 
>>>> On Jul 15, 2022, at 8:13 PM, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Dear Jeong-dong and *AD (John),
>>>> 
>>>> * John, per our process, we will need your approval for the removal of "MUST" in Section 4, Paragraph 2 (just after Figure 1).
>>> 
>>> Yes, this change is fine, thanks for checking.
>>> 
>>> —John
>> 
> 
>> From: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 
>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
>> Date: July 19, 2022 at 12:55:55 PM PDT
>> To: Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr>
>> Cc: teas-ads@ietf.org, John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>, 
>> hejia@huawei.com, italo.busi@huawei.com, 윤빈영 <byyun@etri.re.kr>, 
>> peter.park@kt.com, RFC System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, 
>> teas-chairs@ietf.org, Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vbeeram@juniper.net>, 
>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
>> 
>> Dear Jeong-dong,
>> 
>> We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
>> 
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9270
>> 
>> Thank you very much!
>> 
>> RFC Editor/lb
>> 
>>> On Jul 18, 2022, at 6:09 PM, Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear Lynne,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for the updates. They are all good to me. I hope the outstanding issue related to the removal of "MUST" will be finalized according to the response from our AD, John. 
>>> 
>>> Thanks again.
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> 
>>> Jeong-dong
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From:  "Lynne Bartholomew" <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
>>> To:     "Jeong-dong Ryoo" <ryoo@etri.re.kr>;   <teas-ads@ietf.org>;  "John Scudder" <jgs@juniper.net>; 
>>> Cc:      <hejia@huawei.com>;   <italo.busi@huawei.com>;  "윤빈영" <byyun@etri.re.kr>;   <peter.park@kt.com>;  "RFC System" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;   <teas-chairs@ietf.org>;  "Vishnu Pavan Beeram" <vbeeram@juniper.net>;   <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; 
>>> Sent:  2022-07-16 (토) 09:14:14 (UTC+09:00)
>>> Subject: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 
>>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
>>> 
>>> Dear Jeong-dong and *AD (John),
>>> 
>>> * John, per our process, we will need your approval for the removal of "MUST" in Section 4, Paragraph 2 (just after Figure 1).
>>> 
>>> Jeong-dong, thank you for your prompt reply!  We have updated this document per your notes below.
>>> 
>>> The latest files are posted here:
>>> 
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.txt
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.pdf
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270.xml
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-diff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-rfcdiff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-auth48diff.html
>>> 
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-alt-diff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-xmldiff1.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9270-xmldiff2.html
>>> 
>>> Thanks again for your quick reply and help!
>>> 
>>> RFC Editor/lb
>>> 
>>>> On Jul 14, 2022, at 7:00 PM, Jeong-dong Ryoo <ryoo@etri.re.kr> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Dear RFC Editor,
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you for your email. 
>>>> 
>>>> Please, see my answers to your questions as follows:
>>>> 
>>>> 1) Thank you for the improvements you've done. I am ok with the changes.
>>>> 
>>>> 2) As you pointed out, I couldn't find the "MUST" as related to RFC 3209, either. I suggest the following change (removing MUST):
>>>> 
>>>> OLD:
>>>> Per RFC
>>>> 3209 [RFC3209], in order to achieve resource sharing during the 
>>>> signaling of these protecting LSPs, they MUST have the same Tunnel 
>>>> Endpoint Address (as part of their SESSION object).
>>>> 
>>>> NEW:
>>>> Per RFC
>>>> 3209 [RFC3209], in order to achieve resource sharing during the 
>>>> signaling of these protecting LSPs, they have the same Tunnel 
>>>> Endpoint Address (as part of their SESSION object).
>>>> 
>>>> 3) According to the definition and usage of the <aside> element, it looks like there will be no problem putting the "Note:" in the <aside> element. But, I don't know what the resulting text looks like if the <aside> element is used. Nevertheless, I should be ok as long as the text is there.
>>>> 
>>>> 4) Thank you for taking a close look at those reference documents as well. Both  expressions are understood to be the same. I would like to keep object names consistent in this document by making them all uppercase.
>>>> 
>>>> 5) Yes, it means "preemption status". I am fine with your suggestion.
>>>> 
>>>> 6) "SMP" in the "SMP protecting LSP" is not really necessary. Since we use "protecting  LSP" throughout this document except Section 5.6, please, replace "SMP protecting LSP" with "protecting LSP" in Section 5.6.    
>>>> 
>>>> 7) Sorry for the confusion. Suggestion #1 is correct.
>>>> 
>>>> 8) Your change is good.
>>>> 
>>>> 9) I am aware of the terms related to the "inclusive language" and tried not to use them. I don't think any changes are needed. 
>>>> 
>>>> 10) No objection. Thank you for the consistency check.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you.
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Best regards,
>>>> 
>>>> Jeong-dong
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From:  "" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
>>>> To:      <hejia@huawei.com>;   <italo.busi@huawei.com>;   <ryoo@etri.re.kr>;   <byyun@etri.re.kr>;   <peter.park@kt.com>; 
>>>> Cc:      <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;   <teas-ads@ietf.org>;   <teas-chairs@ietf.org>;   <vbeeram@juniper.net>;   <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; 
>>>> Sent:  2022-07-13 (수) 07:37:12 (UTC+09:00)
>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9270 
>>>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12> for your review
>>>> 
>>>> Authors,
>>>> 
>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>> 
>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviated (running) title (.pdf output) and body 
>>>> of
>>>> document:  Because this document and RFC 4872 state that they define 
>>>> extensions (i.e., more than one extension) for GMPLS signaling, we 
>>>> changed "extension" to "extensions" as noted below.  Please review, 
>>>> and let us know any concerns.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> GMPLS Extension for SMP
>>>> ...
>>>> 4.  Operation of SMP with GMPLS Signaling Extension . . . . . . .   5
>>>> 5.  GMPLS Signaling Extension for SMP . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   6
>>>> ...
>>>> RFC 4872 [RFC4872] defines extension of Resource Reservation 
>>>> Protocol
>>>> - Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE) to support Shared Mesh Restoration
>>>> (SMR) mechanisms.
>>>> 
>>>> Currently:
>>>> GMPLS Extensions for SMP
>>>> ...
>>>> 4.  Operation of SMP with GMPLS Signaling Extensions 5.  GMPLS 
>>>> Signaling Extensions for SMP ...
>>>> RFC 4872 [RFC4872] defines extensions for Resource Reservation 
>>>> Protocol - Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE) to support Shared Mesh 
>>>> Restoration (SMR) mechanisms. -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Section 4:  We could not verify the "MUST" as 
>>>> related to RFC 3209.  Please verify that this text is correct and 
>>>> will be clear to readers.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> Per RFC
>>>> 3209 [RFC3209], in order to achieve resource sharing during the 
>>>> signaling of these protecting LSPs, they MUST have the same Tunnel 
>>>> Endpoint Address (as part of their SESSION object). -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2:  Please review whether this "Note:" 
>>>> item should be in the <aside> element.  <aside> is defined as "a 
>>>> container for content that is semantically less important or 
>>>> tangential to the content that surrounds it"
>>>> (https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/xml2rfc-doc.html#name-aside-2).
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> Note: N bit is set to indicate that the protection switching 
>>>> signaling is done via data plane. -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.3:  We see that RFC 3473 uses "Admin_Status"
>>>> instead of "ADMIN_STATUS", while RFCs 4872 and 4873 use 
>>>> "ADMIN_STATUS".  However, RFC 4873 also uses "Admin_Status".  Will 
>>>> these distinctions be clear to readers?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> The formerly working LSP MAY be signaled with the A bit set in the 
>>>> ADMIN_STATUS object (see [RFC3473]). -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.4:  Does "preempted situation" mean 
>>>> "preemption status" or something else?  If the suggested text is not 
>>>> correct, please clarify.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> Once the working LSP and the
>>>> protecting LSP are configured or pre-configured, the end node MUST 
>>>> keep refreshing both working and protecting LSPs regardless of 
>>>> failure or preempted situation.
>>>> 
>>>> Suggested:
>>>> Once the working LSP and the
>>>> protecting LSP are configured or preconfigured, the end node MUST 
>>>> keep refreshing both working and protecting LSPs, regardless of 
>>>> failure or preemption status. -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.6:  Do these four instances of "SMP 
>>>> protecting LSP" mean "SMP's protecting LSP", "protecting LSP for 
>>>> SMP", or something else?
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> SMP relies on APS protocol messages being exchanged between the 
>>>> nodes along the path to activate an SMP protecting LSP.
>>>> 
>>>> In order to allow the exchange of APS protocol messages, an APS 
>>>> channel has to be configured between adjacent nodes along the path 
>>>> of the SMP protecting LSP.  This is done by other means than GMPLS 
>>>> signaling, before any SMP protecting LSP has been set up.
>>>> Therefore, there are likely additional requirements for APS 
>>>> configuration which are outside the scope of this document.
>>>> 
>>>> Depending on the APS protocol message format, the APS protocol may 
>>>> use different identifiers than GMPLS signaling to identify the SMP 
>>>> protecting LSP. -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.2:  We had trouble determining what is 
>>>> "only applicable" in this sentence, because of the comma after "1".
>>>> If neither suggestion below is correct, please clarify.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> The O bit is only
>>>> applicable when the P bit is set to 1, and the LSP Protection Type 
>>>> Flag is set to 0x04 (1:N Protection with Extra-Traffic), 0x08 (1+1 
>>>> Unidirectional Protection), 0x10 (1+1 Bidirectional Protection), or
>>>> 0x20 (Shared Mesh Protection).
>>>> 
>>>> Suggestion #1 (only applicable when (1) and (2) are applied):
>>>> The O bit is only
>>>> applicable when (1) the P bit is set to 1 and (2) the LSP Protection 
>>>> Type Flag is set to 0x04 (1:N Protection with Extra-Traffic), 0x08
>>>> (1+1 Unidirectional Protection), 0x10 (1+1 Bidirectional 
>>>> Protection), or 0x20 (Shared Mesh Protection).
>>>> 
>>>> Suggestion #2 (only applicable when the P bit is set to 1):
>>>> The O bit is only
>>>> applicable when the P bit is set to 1.  Also, the LSP Protection 
>>>> Type Flag is set to 0x04 (1:N Protection with Extra-Traffic),
>>>> 0x08 (1+1 Unidirectional Protection), 0x10 (1+1 Bidirectional 
>>>> Protection), or 0x20 (Shared Mesh Protection). -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Section 6.3:  This paragraph was difficult to 
>>>> follow; for example, "several fields from that field" reads oddly.
>>>> Also, the fourth sentence appeared to conflict with Section 1, 
>>>> Paragraph 1, last sentence of this document, as well as Section 9.2 of RFC 4873.
>>>> We updated the text as follows.  Please review carefully, and let us 
>>>> know if anything is incorrect.
>>>> 
>>>> Original:
>>>> [RFC4872] reserved a 32-bit field in the PROTECTION object header.
>>>> Subsequently, [RFC4873] allocated several fields from that field, 
>>>> and left the remainder of the bits reserved.  This specification 
>>>> further allocates the preemption priority field from those 
>>>> formerly-reserved bits.  The 32-bit field in the PROTECTION object 
>>>> defined in [RFC4873] are updated as follows:
>>>> 
>>>> Currently (the subject-verb disagreement in the fourth sentence has 
>>>> been corrected):
>>>> [RFC4872] reserved a 32-bit field in the PROTECTION object header.
>>>> Subsequently, [RFC4873] allocated several bits from that field and 
>>>> left the remainder of the bits reserved.  This specification further 
>>>> allocates the Preemption Priority field from the remaining formerly 
>>>> reserved bits.  The 32-bit field in the PROTECTION object as defined 
>>>> in [RFC4872] and modified by [RFC4873] is updated by this document 
>>>> as
>>>> follows: -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of 
>>>> the online Style Guide at 
>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>,
>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did 
>>>> not flag any words or phrases. -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] The following terms were used inconsistently in 
>>>> this document.  We chose to use the latter forms.  Please let us 
>>>> know any objections.
>>>> 
>>>> LSP protection type / LSP Protection Type (per RFC 4872)
>>>> 
>>>> Protection Object / PROTECTION object (in text) (per RFC 4872, with 
>>>> one exception, which appears to be an oversight) -->
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you.
>>>> 
>>>> RFC Editor
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> On Jul 12, 2022, at 3:32 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
>>>> 
>>>> Updated 2022/07/12
>>>> 
>>>> RFC Author(s):
>>>> --------------
>>>> 
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>>>> RFC9270 (draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-signaling-smp-12)
>>>> 
>>>> Title            : GMPLS Signaling Extensions for Shared Mesh Protection
>>>> Author(s)        : J. He, I. Busi, J. Ryoo, B. Yoon, P. Park
>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Vishnu Pavan Beeram, Lou Berger
>>>> 
>>>> Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston
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