Re: [AVTCORE] WG last call on draft-ietf-avtcore-avp-codecs-01

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

WG,

Here is my individual review of the draft.

1. The Abstract must not contain citations, see 3.1.B of the
ID-checklist: https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist.html Instead use
title or abbreveitaded title to make clear what is referred to.

2. Section 3 and 3.1:

I believe that this section would be clearer if it was presented as:


3.  Updates to RFC 3551

   The following text of [RFC3551] is hereby updated as set forth below
   in Section 3.1:

   Audio applications operating under this profile SHOULD, at a minimum,
   be able to send and/or receive payload types 0 (PCMU) and 5 (DVI4).
   This allows interoperability without format negotiation and ensures
   successful negotiation with a conference control protocol.


3.1.  Updates to Section 6

   In the final paragraph of Section 6, replace, "payload types 0 (PCMU)
   and 5 (DVI4)," with "payload type 0 (PCMU)."  Also, add a final
   sentence to this paragraph that states, "Some environments MAY make
   support for PCMU mandatory." Resulting in the following paragraph:

   Audio applications operating under this profile SHOULD, at a minimum,
   be able to send and/or receive payload type 0 (PCMU). This allows
   interoperability without format negotiation and ensures successful
   negotiation with a conference control protocol. Some environments
   MAY make support for PCMU mandatory.

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Note, this does not take the other comments or mailing list discussion
into account.


Cheers

Magnus




On 2013-03-12 20:02, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
> WG,
> 
> This is to announce the start of a WG last call on:
> 
> Update to Recommended Codecs for the RTP Profile for Audio and Video
> Conferences with Minimal Control (RTP/AVP) to be published as a proposed
> standard.
> 
> Document can be retrieved here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-avp-codecs
> 
> Please provide any feedback by the 31st of March.
> 
> Regards
> 
> Magnus Westerlund
> WG chair
> 
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