Re: [babel] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-05: (with COMMENT)

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Mon, 12 February 2024 23:14 UTC

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
To: Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [babel] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-05: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks, Erik.

> ### S3.2
> 
> * Up to you, but it occurs to me that in this final paragraph you might also
>   note that any routers using NTP can manage their clock drift, further
>   minimizing the likelihood of impacting the RTT calculation described here.

I'll add a sentence to this effect.

> ### S4.1
> 
> * Even within an Experimental subsection within a Standards Track document,
>   itself a bit unusual, it seems odd to have text like "our implementation"
>   and "we have/have not ...".  Can this be reworded to avoid giving the
>   impression that there's an IETF-approved implementation?  Perhaps something
>   like "At least one implementation", "One or more implementations are known
>   to ...", or something?

Agreed.  "One implementation" sound fine to me.

Thanks again,

-- Juliusz