[babel] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [babel] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-05: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-05: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension-05 CC @ekline * comment syntax: - https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md * "Handling Ballot Positions": - https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ ## Comments ### S3.2 * Up to you, but it occurs to me that in this final paragraph you might also note that any routers using NTP can manage their clock drift, further minimizing the likelihood of impacting the RTT calculation described here. ### S4.1 * Even within an Experimental subsection within a Standards Track document, itself a bit unusual, it seems odd to have text like "our implementation" and "we have/have not ...". Can this be reworded to avoid giving the impression that there's an IETF-approved implementation? Perhaps something like "At least one implementation", "One or more implementations are known to ...", or something? ## Nits ### S1 * "this kind of link layers" -> "these kinds of link layers"?
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