[babel] Shepherd's write up on draft-ietf-bable-rtt-extension-04

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sun, 06 August 2023 13:45 UTC

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Subject: [babel] Shepherd's write up on draft-ietf-bable-rtt-extension-04
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Hi,

I have uploaded a Shepherd's write-up here
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-babel-rtt-extension/shepherdwriteup/

Producing that write-up caused me to re-read the draft and notice one
thing, which is presumably one of the purposes of the slightly exhaustive
template: At the top of the title page, it says it updates RFC 8967.
Shouldn't that be 8966?

This seems like something that can be fixed at AUTH48 or at the same time
as some change is made due to AD or Directorate or IESG review.

Thanks,
Donald
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