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Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com> Fri, 07 July 2023 19:29 UTC

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From: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 07 Jul 2023 14:28:41 -0500
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Subject: Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
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Dear Jorge: Thank you for addressing my comments.

The edits look good, I have no further comments on the draft.

Cheers,

- vijay

On Thu, Jul 6, 2023 at 12:58 PM Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <
jorge.rabadan@nokia.com> wrote:

> Hi Vijay,
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> Thanks very much for reviewing.
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> We just published version 11 which addresses all your comments.
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> Thanks!
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> Jorge
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> *Date: *Sunday, July 2, 2023 at 12:13 PM
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> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2023-07-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a
> few
> nite.
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> Major issues: 0
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> Minor issues: 1 (please see below)
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> Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below)
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> Minor
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> - Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it
> may
> be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for.
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> Nits:
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> - Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in
> your
> nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific).
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> - Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long.  You may consider the following
> edit: s/route, by replacing/route.  It does so by replacing/
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> - Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/
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