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From: "Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)" <jorge.rabadan@nokia.com>
To: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
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Hi Vijay,

Thanks very much for reviewing.
We just published version 11 which addresses all your comments.

Thanks!
Jorge

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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10

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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2023-07-02
IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a few
nite.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 1 (please see below)

Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below)

Minor

- Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it may
be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for.

Nits:

- Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in your
nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific).

- Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long.  You may consider the following
edit: s/route, by replacing/route.  It does so by replacing/

- Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/

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