Re: [bess] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10

Vijay, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars

> On Jul 2, 2023, at 22:13, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2023-07-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a few
> nite.
> 
> Major issues: 0
> 
> Minor issues: 1 (please see below)
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below)
> 
> Minor
> 
> - Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it may
> be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for.
> 
> Nits:
> 
> - Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in your
> nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific).
> 
> - Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long.  You may consider the following
> edit: s/route, by replacing/route.  It does so by replacing/
> 
> - Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/
> 
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Re: [bess] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10

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