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Re: [bess] Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-18

"Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr)" <nmalhotr@cisco.com> Tue, 05 December 2023 02:42 UTC

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From: "Neeraj Malhotra (nmalhotr)" <nmalhotr@cisco.com>
To: Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Mallory,

Many thanks for the review and comments. Rev 19 of the document (just published) incorporates your comments below along with additional comments from Rtgdir early review. Please do let me know if you see anything else outstanding.

Thanks,
Neeraj

From: Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Thursday, November 16, 2023 at 10:13 AM
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Subject: Genart early review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-18
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 16 Nov 2023

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be fixed before publication.

Major issues: Section 3 as the Solution Overview seems out of step with the
remaining sections in that it properly describes the relationships between 4, 5
and 6, but it appears that 7-10 are additional over arching considerations that
might benefit from being extracted from the discussion of direct solutions.
Suggesting perhaps that 4, 5 and 6 be treated under the solution space, whereas
the remaining substantive sections 7-10 be presented as additional
considerations and tradeoffs but not direct descriptions of full solutions to
the problems outlined in the introduction.

Minor issues: Not all acronyms are properly expanded in order of their
first-time use which hinders readability. Seems 12. Operational Considerations
is superfluous and plenty of document dependencies also do not have this
section.

Nits/editorial comments: The focus of my review did not expose any
nits/editorial comments though I believe there are some that have persisted
across the various versions that I compared and I would encourage the authors
to do a full copy edit ahead of IESG submission.

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