[Bgp-autoconf] Revoicing DT document for -00

Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org> Sat, 06 March 2021 20:20 UTC

Return-Path: <jhaas@slice.pfrc.org>
X-Original-To: bgp-autoconf@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: bgp-autoconf@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2CAD73A157C for <bgp-autoconf@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sat, 6 Mar 2021 12:20:14 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.889
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.889 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_HTML_ATTACH=0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 6zmBbmHe_ENM for <bgp-autoconf@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sat, 6 Mar 2021 12:20:09 -0800 (PST)
Received: from slice.pfrc.org (slice.pfrc.org [67.207.130.108]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 998763A157A for <bgp-autoconf@ietf.org>; Sat, 6 Mar 2021 12:20:08 -0800 (PST)
Received: by slice.pfrc.org (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 9B5411E409; Sat, 6 Mar 2021 15:41:05 -0500 (EST)
Date: Sat, 06 Mar 2021 15:41:05 -0500
From: Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org>
To: bgp-autoconf@ietf.org
Message-ID: <20210306204105.GF13488@pfrc.org>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="4Ckj6UjgE2iN1+kY"
Content-Disposition: inline
User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15)
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/bgp-autoconf/ECIvJ0xzTdEUxrNFDBPR2DdjZ9I>
Subject: [Bgp-autoconf] Revoicing DT document for -00
X-BeenThere: bgp-autoconf@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: BGP autoconfiguration design team discussion list <bgp-autoconf.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/bgp-autoconf>, <mailto:bgp-autoconf-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/bgp-autoconf/>
List-Post: <mailto:bgp-autoconf@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:bgp-autoconf-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bgp-autoconf>, <mailto:bgp-autoconf-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 06 Mar 2021 20:20:14 -0000

I've completed the revoicing work I had discussed in the last two sessions.
For review:
- The master branch copy here contains all changes from the design team to
  date. [1]
- The jhaas voice branch contains the document post changes. [2]


For convenience, I've attached the rfcdiff so the changes are more obvious.

The intent of the revoicing is to make the state requirements show up very
clearly at the beginning of the text and then to expand on them.  The second
change is to get the protocol comparisons out of the main text and into the
appendix.

-- Jeff

[1] https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations/blob/master/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations.txt

[2] https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations/blob/jhaas/draft-00-revoice/draft-dt-idr-bgp-autoconf-considerations.txt