Re: [Bier] New Version Notification for draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt

["Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

Repeating the same comments as for 00, the 2 following comments still apply for sure

  *   Please follow RFC6087 guidelines e.g. use of <CODE BEGINS>, <CODE ENDS> etc
  *   Finally, please use the validator @ http://www.yangvalidator.com/

Regards,
Reshad.

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Date: Thursday, October 22, 2015 at 4:59 AM
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Subject: [Bier] New Version Notification for draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt

Hi all，
We have updated draft-chh-bier-bier-yang to 01 version.
The link is：  https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
Any comments and suggestion are welcome. Thanks.
Regards,
Ran


[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]> 写于 2015/10/19 10:27:13:

> 发件人:  [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>
> 收件人:  "Xianxian Dai" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>,
> "[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "Zheng Zhang"
> <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "fangwei hu" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>,
> "Fangwei Hu" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "Ran Chen"
> <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "Mahesh Sivakumar" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>,
> "Zheng Zhang" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "Mahesh Sivakumar"
> <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, "Ran Chen" <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>,
> 日期:  2015/10/19 10:27
> 主题: New Version Notification for draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Ran Chen and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:      draft-chh-bier-bier-yang
> Revision:   01
> Title:      YANG Data Model for BIER Protocol
> Document date:   2015-10-16
> Group:      Individual Submission
> Pages:      17
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-chh-bier-
> bier-yang-01.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-chh-bier-bier-yang/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for BIER configuration and
>    operation.
>
>
>
>
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>
> The IETF Secretariat
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Hi, Rahman, 

Thanks for your comments, we will correct it based on your suggestion.

Regards 
Fangwei.



"Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <[e-mail]>
发件人:  "BIER" <[e-mail]> 2015-07-23 19:43
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[Bier] Comments on draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-00




Hi authors, 
* I tried to pyang the model in the draft and ran into quite a few errors. I
stopped after the 4 below (these are basic YANG errors, wasn’t even using
strict/ietf option)
* Once you fix these errors please compile with ―ietf option (sricter rules
regarding ordering of statements, requiring description etc etc)
* Please follow RFC6087 guidelines e.g. use of <CODE BEGINS>, <CODE ENDS>
etc 
* Finally, please use the validator @ http://www.yangvalidator.com/
<http://www.yangvalidator.com/>

Regards, 
Reshad. 

ERRORS 

No “” for the contact
ietf-bier.yang:34: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword
"contact", looking at L

Extra “ in "reference "draft-chen-bier-bier-yang-00”;
59: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "reference",
looking at d 

Missing ; in key "sub-domain-id"
125: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "key", looking at
l 

Missing ; in type if:interface-ref
154: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "type", looking at
} 


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