Re: [Bier] New Version Notification for draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt

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Hi Reshad,
Thank you your comments.
please see inline.Thanks.

Regards,
Ran





发件人:         "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <[e-mail]>
收件人:         "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>, 
"[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>, 
抄送:   "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>, 
"[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>, "Mahesh Sivakumar 
\(masivaku\)" <[e-mail]>
日期:   2015/10/22 22:10
主题:   Re: [Bier] New Version Notification for 
draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
发件人: "BIER" <[e-mail]>



Hi,

Repeating the same comments as for 00, the 2 following comments still 
apply for sure
Please follow RFC6087 guidelines e.g. use of <CODE BEGINS>, <CODE ENDS> 
etc   
<Ran>: OK. we will add it in next version. Thanks 
Finally, please use the validator @ http://www.yangvalidator.com/  
<Ran>:  Sure, we have used this validator, and have passed.Please see 
below:


Regards,
Reshad.

From: BIER <[e-mail]> on behalf of "[e-mail]" <
[e-mail]>
Date: Thursday, October 22, 2015 at 4:59 AM
To: "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>
Cc: "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>, "Mahesh Sivakumar 
(masivaku)" <[e-mail]>, "[e-mail]" <
[e-mail]>
Subject: [Bier] New Version Notification for 
draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt

Hi all， 
We have updated draft-chh-bier-bier-yang to 01 version. 
The link is：  
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
Any comments and suggestion are welcome. Thanks.
Regards, 
Ran


[e-mail] 写于 2015/10/19 10:27:13:

> 发件人:  [e-mail] 
> 收件人:  "Xianxian Dai" <[e-mail]>, 
> "[e-mail]" <[e-mail]>, "Zheng Zhang" 
> <[e-mail]>, "fangwei hu" <[e-mail]>, 
> "Fangwei Hu" <[e-mail]>, "Ran Chen" 
> <[e-mail]>, "Mahesh Sivakumar" <[e-mail]>, 
> "Zheng Zhang" <[e-mail]>, "Mahesh Sivakumar" 
> <[e-mail]>, "Ran Chen" <[e-mail]>, 
> 日期:  2015/10/19 10:27 
> 主题: New Version Notification for draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Ran Chen and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Name:      draft-chh-bier-bier-yang
> Revision:   01
> Title:      YANG Data Model for BIER Protocol
> Document date:   2015-10-16
> Group:      Individual Submission
> Pages:      17
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-chh-bier-
> bier-yang-01.txt
> Status:         
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-chh-bier-bier-yang/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01
> Diff:           
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-01
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for BIER configuration and
>    operation.
> 
>  
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> The IETF Secretariat
> 
-----来自 <[e-mail]> 的消息，在 Thu, 23 Jul 2015 20:46:17 
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收件人:
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抄送:
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主题:
Re: [Bier] Comments on draft-chh-bier-bier-yang-00
Hi, Rahman, 

Thanks for your comments, we will correct it based on your suggestion. 

Regards 
Fangwei.



"Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <[e-mail]> 
发件人:  "BIER" <[e-mail]> 
2015-07-23 19:43 


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Hi authors, 
I tried to pyang the model in the draft and ran into quite a few errors. I 
stopped after the 4 below (these are basic YANG errors, wasn’t even using 
strict/ietf option) 
Once you fix these errors please compile with ―ietf option (sricter rules 
regarding ordering of statements, requiring description etc etc) 
Please follow RFC6087 guidelines e.g. use of <CODE BEGINS>, <CODE ENDS> 
etc 
Finally, please use the validator @ http://www.yangvalidator.com/

Regards, 
Reshad. 

ERRORS 

No “” for the contact 
ietf-bier.yang:34: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword 
"contact", looking at L 

Extra “ in "reference "draft-chen-bier-bier-yang-00”; 
59: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "reference", 
looking at d 

Missing ; in key "sub-domain-id" 
125: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "key", looking 
at l 

Missing ; in type if:interface-ref 
154: error: unterminated statement definition for keyword "type", looking 
at } 


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