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Re: [Bier] WGLC: draft-ietf-bier-php

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Tue, 18 August 2020 16:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Bier] WGLC: draft-ietf-bier-php
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Hi Greg S., et al.,
I've read the draft and support its publication. The document is
well-written and addresses the practical use case.

Several nits for the next update:
Abstract

   - AFAIK, references are not used in the Abstract, documents mentioned as
   text, e.g., RFC 6514 or RFC 7432.

In the text

   - s/BIER capable/BIER-capable/4
   - s/the preferred the choice/the preferred choice/
   - s/BIER incapable/BIER-incapable/7

The Security Considerations section might benefit from references to BIER
Architecture and "OSPF/ISIS/BGP extensions for BIER signaling" mentioned
there.

Regards,
Greg M

On Wed, Aug 12, 2020 at 8:31 PM Greg Shepherd <gjshep@gmail.com> wrote:

>
> Please read and respond to this thread. We had a WGLC for this draft
> previously, but had no response. Let’s do better.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bier-php/
>
> Start of short LC timer. Respond by Aug 19..
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> - Shep
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