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From: "Bidgoli, Hooman (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)" <hooman.bidgoli@nokia.com>
To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>, BIER WG <bier@ietf.org>, BIER WG Chairs <bier-chairs@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Bier] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
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Greg

I don’t see any of my suggestion incorporated in the new version 11, is there a reason or did you miss my email on sep-25 attached and copy paste below?

From: BIER bier-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:bier-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Bidgoli, Hooman (Nokia - CA/Ottawa)
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Cc: zhang.zheng@zte.com.cn<mailto:zhang.zheng@zte.com.cn>
Subject: [Bier] Shephard of draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery

Hi Authors

My comments in the link below, before writing the shepherd doc please address these comments.


https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1acW5U6Yx5RS6cvhCLneyckmsRomTA3DO?usp=sharing

Regards
Hooman


Regards
Hooman




From: BIER <bier-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Greg Mirsky
Sent: Monday, October 4, 2021 10:34 PM
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Subject: [Bier] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt

Dear All,
technical refresh. We are ready for the Shepherd review and comments.

Regards,
Greg
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Subject: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Bit Indexed Explicit Replication WG of the IETF.

        Title           : Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery (PMTUD) for Bit Index Explicit Replication (BIER) Layer
        Authors         : Greg Mirsky
                          Tony Przygienda
                          Andrew Dolganow
        Filename        : draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
        Pages           : 8
        Date            : 2021-10-04

Abstract:
   This document describes Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery
   (PMTUD) in Bit Indexed Explicit Replication (BIER) layer.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery/

There is also an HTML version available at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.html

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11


Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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Hi Authors



My comments in the link below, before writing the shepherd doc please address these comments.





https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1acW5U6Yx5RS6cvhCLneyckmsRomTA3DO?usp=sharing



Regards

Hooman
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