Re: [Bier] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Sun, 10 October 2021 01:55 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 09 Oct 2021 18:54:55 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Bier] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
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Hi Hooman,
I am so sorry for missing your earlier email. Many thanks for your review
and helpful suggestions. Attached, please find the copy with my answers to
your questions, the updated version of the draft, and the diff. Please let
me know if you have any further questions, suggestions to improve it.

Regards,
Greg

On Sat, Oct 9, 2021 at 9:53 AM Bidgoli, Hooman (Nokia - CA/Ottawa) <
hooman.bidgoli@nokia.com> wrote:

> Greg
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> I don’t see any of my suggestion incorporated in the new version 11, is
> there a reason or did you miss my email on sep-25 attached and copy paste
> below?
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> *From:* BIER bier-bounces@ietf.org *On Behalf Of * Bidgoli, Hooman (Nokia
> - CA/Ottawa)
> *Sent:* Saturday, September 25, 2021 4:46 PM
> *To:* bier-chairs@ietf.org; BIER WG bier@ietf.org;
> draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery@ietf.org
> *Cc:* zhang.zheng@zte.com.cn
> *Subject:* [Bier] Shephard of draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery
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> Hi Authors
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> My comments in the link below, before writing the shepherd doc please
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> https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1acW5U6Yx5RS6cvhCLneyckmsRomTA3DO?usp=sharing
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> Regards
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> Regards
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> *From:* BIER <bier-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of *Greg Mirsky
> *Sent:* Monday, October 4, 2021 10:34 PM
> *To:* BIER WG <bier@ietf.org>; BIER WG Chairs <bier-chairs@ietf.org>
> *Subject:* [Bier] Fwd: I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
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> Dear All,
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> technical refresh. We are ready for the Shepherd review and comments.
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> Regards,
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> Greg
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> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Date: Mon, Oct 4, 2021 at 7:31 PM
> Subject: [Bier] I-D Action: draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
> To: <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
> Cc: <bier@ietf.org>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Bit Indexed Explicit Replication WG of
> the IETF.
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>         Title           : Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery (PMTUD)
> for Bit Index Explicit Replication (BIER) Layer
>         Authors         : Greg Mirsky
>                           Tony Przygienda
>                           Andrew Dolganow
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.txt
>         Pages           : 8
>         Date            : 2021-10-04
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> Abstract:
>    This document describes Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery
>    (PMTUD) in Bit Indexed Explicit Replication (BIER) layer.
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery/
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> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11.html
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bier-path-mtu-discovery-11
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> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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