Re: [bmwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-15: (with COMMENT)

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Murray,

Never mind. I just remembered this has already been done. Apologies for not following the thread better.

Brian

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Subject: RE: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-15: (with COMMENT)

Murray,

Thanks for updating your status.

I'm not sure how this works, so my apologies if I am suggesting something outside of the norm....

Do you have any problem us addressing your well-founded nits in the version that will be posted as a result of the IETF Editor review?

Brian

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Subject: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-15: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-15: No Objection

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Thanks for handling my DISCUSS about all the normative language used here.

Nits not yet mentioned by others:

Section 4.2:

* "... users SHOULD configure their device ..." -- s/device/devices/ (unless all users share one device)

Section 6.3:

* "The value SHOULD be expressed in millisecond." -- s/millisecond/milliseconds/