[bmwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-15: (with COMMENT)

[Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-15: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for handling my DISCUSS about all the normative language used here.

Nits not yet mentioned by others:

Section 4.2:

* "... users SHOULD configure their device ..." -- s/device/devices/ (unless
all users share one device)

Section 6.3:

* "The value SHOULD be expressed in millisecond." -- s/millisecond/milliseconds/