Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic-recovery-34.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
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Subject: Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic-recovery-34.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
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I have these changes staged in our copy and can provide an update based on that. I don't know how the rfc-editor.org links got broken though: the XML I have uses /info/ for all RFC reference targets. On Tue, May 18, 2021, at 10:02, Jana Iyengar via C430 wrote: > Jean, Ian, > > Given that we are making these changes for the transport document, it > might make sense for us to do these as well. Also so that our github > repo is in line with what eventually gets published. I'm happy to make > these changes. > > - jana > > On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 3:32 PM Ian Swett via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Thanks, please make those updates. > > > > On Mon, May 17, 2021 at 5:25 PM Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> wrote: > >> Ian, > > >> Thank you for the updated document! We found a few small issues: > > >>> We found a typo ("itsestimate") in the XML that is not present in the markdown file in GitHub: > > >>> This also > allows a connection to reset itsestimate of min_rtt and smoothed_rtt > after a disruptive network event; see Section 5.3. > >>> In our edits, we had updated the [RACK] reference from draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-15 to the RFC that replaced it (RFC 8985). We see that the reference has changed back to draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-15. Is this intentional? > > >>> In the References section, the URLs for RFCs should point to the RFC landing page ("/info/" instead of "/rfc/"): > > >>> Current: <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfcNNNN> > > >>> Should be: <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfcNNNN> > > > >> Would you like us to make these updates or would you like to update the file? > > >> Best regards, > > >> RFC Editor/jm > > >> On 5/7/21 12:57 PM, Ian Swett wrote: > >>> Similar to Martin, I'm writing PRs to address these issues. > >>> > >>> Changes are in PR #4892 <https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4892> unless otherwise noted. I've gone over the changes with Jana and he's now approved the relevant PRs, so I think we're good to go. > >>> > >>> On Thu, Apr 29, 2021 at 2:19 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>>> Authors, > >>>> > >>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve > >>>> (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>>> > >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > >>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> Thanks, in https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4890 > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the cross reference to point to RFC 6298 > >>>> ("Computing TCP's Retransmission Timer") instead of RFC 6297 ("A Survey of > >>>> Lower-than-Best-Effort Transport Protocols"). Please let us know if > >>>> other changes are necessary. > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> QUIC uses a probe timeout (PTO; see Section 6.2), with a timer based > >>>> on TCP's RTO computation; see [RFC6297]. > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> QUIC uses a probe timeout (PTO; see Section 6.2), with a timer based > >>>> on TCP's retransmission timeout (RTO) computation; see [RFC6298]. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Thanks for catching that! > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Does the following improve the readability of the paragraph? > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> Endpoints SHOULD set the min_rtt to the newest RTT sample after > >>>> persistent congestion is established. This is to allow a connection > >>>> to reset its estimate of min_rtt and smoothed_rtt after a > >>>> disruptive network event (Section 5.3), and because it is possible > >>>> that an increase in path delay resulted in persistent congestion > >>>> being incorrectly declared. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> Endpoints SHOULD set the min_rtt to the newest RTT sample after > >>>> persistent congestion is established because it is possible that > >>>> an increase in path delay resulted in persistent congestion being > >>>> incorrectly declared. This also allows a connection to reset its > >>>> estimate of min_rtt and smoothed_rtt after a disruptive network > >>>> event (Section 5.3). > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> I agree this is more readable, but it is subtly different, so I put it in a separate PR: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4891 > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] In the following sentence, do implementations also > >>>> increase the time threshold? > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> Implementations can detect spurious retransmissions and increase > >>>> the reordering threshold in packets or time to reduce future > >>>> spurious retransmissions and loss events. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> Implementations can detect spurious retransmissions and can increase > >>>> the reordering threshold in packets or increase the time threshold > >>>> in order to reduce future spurious retransmissions and loss events. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Changed to "the packet or time reordering threshold to reduce..." to clarify. > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Note that we have marked this Note as an <aside>. > >>>> <aside> is defined as follows: > >>>> > >>>> From https://xml2rfc.tools.ietf.org/xml2rfc-doc.html#name-aside-2 > >>>> This element is a container for content that is semantically > >>>> less important or tangential to the content that surrounds it. > >>>> > >>>> Please let us know if any updates are needed. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Included in https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4889 > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following term appears to be used > >>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how they > >>>> may be made consistent. > >>>> > >>>> application data / Application Data > >>>> > >>>> Note that RFC-to-be 9000 <draft-ietf-quic-transport> uses the lowercase > >>>> form consistently. > >>>> > >>>> We raised a similar question for RFC-to-be 9001; the authors decided on the following: > >>>> > >>>> > The outcome is that figures will use title case for consistency (as appropriate) > >>>> > and text will use the lowercase form. There is one reference to TLS > >>>> > Application Data, where I have kept the title case to match the usage in RFC 8446. > >>>> > >>>> (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/pipermail/c430/2021-April/000016.html) > >>>> > >>>> --> > >>> > >>> I changed the text to use "Application Data" when referring to the packet number space, and "application data" otherwise. > >>> https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4893 > >>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] We are having difficulty parsing the following sentence. > >>>> Could the packets be acknowledged if the keys were still available? > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> Initial packets and Handshake packets could be never acknowledged, > >>>> but they are removed from bytes in flight when the Initial and > >>>> Handshake keys are discarded > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> When the Initial and Handshake keys are discarded, the Initial > >>>> packets and Handshake packets can no longer be acknowledged, and > >>>> they are removed from bytes in flight > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Yes, the packets can be acknowledged until the keys are discarded, so I took your suggestion and added 'keys' after the first 'Initial' for parallelism. > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] In the following, is "PTO timer" rather than "probe timer" > >>>> meant? > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> That is, the client MUST set the probe timer if the client has not > >>>> received an acknowledgment for any of its Handshake packets and the > >>>> handshake is not confirmed (see Section 4.1.2 of [QUIC-TLS]), even > >>>> if there are no packets in flight. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Yes, at some point we were using "probe timer" and "PTO timer" interchangeably, but it's best to consistently use PTO timer. Fixed. > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] We are having difficulty parsing the following: > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> It is expected that keys are discarded after packets encrypted with > >>>> them would be acknowledged or declared lost. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> It is expected that keys are discarded at some time after the > >>>> packets encrypted with them are either acknowledged or declared lost. > >>>> > >>>> Or perhaps: > >>>> Some time after the packets are either acknowledged or declared lost, > >>>> the keys with which they were encrypted are discarded. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> The first suggestion is good, so I will use that. The second suggestion doesn't fully convey the intent of the sentence, IMHO. > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFC 9000 (draft-ietf-quic-transport) uses > >>>> <tt> for some equations. Please review and let us know if you would like > >>>> the equations to appear in <tt>. > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> Packets 2 through 8 are declared lost when the acknowledgment for > >>>> packet 9 is received at t = 12.2. > >>>> > >>>> The congestion period is calculated as the time between the oldest > >>>> and newest lost packets: 8 - 1 = 7. The persistent congestion > >>>> duration is: 2 * 3 = 6. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Good point, MT changed in https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4889 > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Does the following reordering of the sentences improve > >>>> readability? > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> When bytes in flight is smaller than the congestion window and > >>>> sending is not pacing limited, the congestion window is > >>>> underutilized. When this occurs, the congestion window SHOULD NOT be > >>>> increased in either slow start or congestion avoidance. This can > >>>> happen due to insufficient application data or flow control limits. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> When the count of bytes in flight is smaller than the congestion > >>>> window and sending is not pacing limited, the congestion window is > >>>> underutilized, which can happen due to insufficient application > >>>> data or reduced flow control limits. When this occurs in either the > >>>> slow start or congestion avoidance states, the congestion window > >>>> SHOULD NOT be increased. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> I think the reordering reads more clearly, but the addition of "count of" does not help, so I swapped the second and third sentences. > >>> > >>>> > >>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] We did not find the paper below published in January 1995. > >>>> We did find one published in 1987 and a revision published in 1991. > >>>> Which one should be referenced? > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> [RETRANSMISSION] > >>>> Karn, P. and C. Partridge, "Improving Round-Trip Time > >>>> Estimates in Reliable Transport Protocols", ACM SIGCOMM > >>>> CCR , January 1995. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> [RETRANSMISSION] > >>>> Karn, P. and C. Partridge, "Improving Round-Trip Time > >>>> Estimates in Reliable Transport Protocols", ACM SIGCOMM > >>>> Computer Communication Review, DOI 10.1145/55483.55484, > >>>> August 1987, <https://doi.org/10.1145/55483.55484>. > >>>> > >>>> Or perhaps: > >>>> [RETRANSMISSION] > >>>> Karn, P. and C. Partridge, "Improving Round-Trip Time > >>>> Estimates in Reliable Transport Protocols", ACM Transactions > >>>> on Computer Systems, DOI 10.1145/118544.118549, > >>>> November 1991, <https://doi.org/10.1145/118544.118549>. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>> > >>> Martin put this into https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/4889 > >>> > >>>> > >>>> Thank you. > >>>> > >>>> RFC Editor > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> On Apr 29, 2021, at 11:14 AM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>>> > >>>> *****IMPORTANT***** > >>>> > >>>> Updated 2021/04/29 > >>>> > >>>> RFC Author(s): > >>>> -------------- > >>>> > >>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > >>>> > >>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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- [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic-rec… rfc-editor
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… rfc-editor
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Ian Swett
- Re: [C430] AUTH48 [JM]: RFC 9002 <draft-ietf-quic… Jean Mahoney