Re: [Cbor] Barry Leiba's Yes on charter-ietf-cbor-01-01: (with COMMENT)

Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Sun, 30 June 2019 18:43 UTC

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Subject: Barry Leiba's Yes on charter-ietf-cbor-01-01: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-cbor-01-01: Yes

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Nit: "a mechanism other that" should be "a mechanism other than".

"and add to a second edition of the specification if warranted" ... presumably this is in the re-charter because it *is* warranted.  I suggest removing "if warranted".
[JLS] I would be happy for a re-wording, but the "if warranted" related to individual features and not to the entire process of producing a second version.   A better string might be "where warrented"

"The body of existing specifications that make use of CDDL is considered
precious":  Awwwwwwwww...  :-)
[JLS] Not actionable?

"It is currently expected that this would be done using a Wiki of some type.
This work would not be expected to be published by the IETF."  Yayyyyy!  Thanks.

Nit: that are either currently adopted by the working group, by other working groups, or as individual submissions" is not a parallel list.  Maybe, "that are currently adopted by the working group, are work items in other working groups, or exist as individual submissions."  Also, I suggest removing the paragraph break between this paragraph and the next.

Nit: "Internet wide specifications" needs a hyphen: "Internet-wide specifications".