[CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wson-encode-19

"Margaria, Cyril (NSN - DE/Munich)" <cyril.margaria@nsn.com> Wed, 13 March 2013 13:54 UTC

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From: "Margaria, Cyril (NSN - DE/Munich)" <cyril.margaria@nsn.com>
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Subject: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wson-encode-19
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Dear Authors,

I have the following comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wson-encode-19

Section 5.1  Resource Block Information Sub-TLV

The sub-TLV format defines the "Input Bit Rate Range List  Sub-Sub-TLV (opt)"
No section defines the Input Bit range List Sub-Sub-TLV, while it was present in the previous version.

I think the section should be re-added.


Mit freundlichen Grüßen / Best Regards
Cyril Margaria

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