Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-zhang-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-tunnel-num-04.txt

[Lou Berger <[e-mail]>]

fyi - changing the title in the text doesn't require a change in the
filename, and such a change just confuses things/people...

On 10/10/2012 2:57 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
> 
> Hi Lou
> 
> We have finished the editing according to your suggestion, please help
> review the draft to see whether another roll of revision is needed.
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-zvxg-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-id-00.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Fei Zhang and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Filename:                  draft-zvxg-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-id
> Revision:                  00
> Title:                                   RSVP-TE Identification of
> MPLS-TP Co-Routed Bidirectional LSP
> Creation date:                  2012-10-12
> WG ID:                                   Individual Submission
> Number of pages: 8
> URL:            
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-zvxg-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-id-00.txt
> Status:        
>  http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-zvxg-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-id
> Htmlized:      
>  http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-zvxg-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-id-00
> 
> 
> Abstract:
>   The MPLS Transport Profile (MPLS-TP) identifiers document [RFC6370]
>   specifies an initial set of identifiers, including the local assigned
>   Z9-Tunnel_Num for co-routed bidirectional LSP, which is not covered
>   by the current specifications, like [RFC3209], [RFC3473].  This
>   document defines Resource ReserVation Protocol Traffic Engnieering
>   (RSVP-TE) identification of MPLS-TP co-routed bidirectional LSP.
> 
> 
> Thanks and best regards  
> 
> ;)
> 
> The authors
> 
> 
> *Lou Berger <[e-mail]>*
> 
> 2012-10-09 02:11
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> 收件人
> 	[e-mail], "Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)" <[e-mail]>,
> [e-mail], [e-mail],
> [e-mail], "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A (ATTLABS)" <[e-mail]>
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> 主题
> 	Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action:
> draft-zhang-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-tunnel-num-04.txt
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> Fei, Authors,
>                 I think you have the document scoped to match the
> discussion.  I'm
> personally still having a hard time with parsing the document.  I think
> I know what you mean to say, it's just that the document isn't always so
> clear.  I think some editing might help.
> 
> Hhere are some suggestions:
> 1) Change the title to something like:
> RSVP-TE Identification of MPLS-TP Co-Routed Bidirectional LSPs
> 
> 2) Simplify the Abstract, perhaps just focus on the purpose of the
> extension vs the details of the extension.
> 
> 3) Ensure the Intro covers the key points clearly.  I see the minimal
> set of key points as:
>   - TP identifiers are defined in RFC6370
>   - Identifiers are need by both end points of a bidirectional LSP
>     for OAM
>   - RFC6370 defines mapping of TP identifiers to RSVP-TE for
>     associated bidirectional LSPs (but other aspects aren't which
>     are covered by [associated-lsp]), but not co-routed LSPs.
>   - The high level approach taken by the draft to address the
>     missing function.
> 
> 4) The Operation section seems to be covering procedures, so why not
> just combine with section 4.2, or add an informational description of
> the extension as part of section 4 (before section 4.1).
> 
> 5) The Procedures section needs to explicitly define what an
> implementation needs to do to (a) support the desired function and (b)
> conform with the document.  Think about covering what the
> ingress/transit/egress needs to do and how it needs to do it.
> 
> Lou
> 
> PS please feel free to respond on-list (including the above) if you'd like.
> 
> On 8/28/2012 12:33 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
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>> Lou
>>
>> We have received comments offline/online and addressed them into the
>> draft v-03 from the polling version 02, then updated the draft to v-04
>> according to the comments received since IETF84 meeting and pushed the
>> proposal into the mailinglist also to hear more opinions.
>>
>> The authors think we have addressed all the comments and this draft is
>> ready for WG consideration now.
>>
>> Any suggestion?
>>
>> Best regards :)
>>
>> Fei
>>
>>
>> *Lou Berger <[e-mail]>*
>>
>> 2012-08-21 01:38
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>> Fei,
>>                 To respond to your procedure point:
>>
>> On 8/17/2012 3:27 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
>>> I am not sure whether this draft should follow the the procedures
>>> defined for WG documents or not.
>>
>> Individual drafts are completely under the control of the authors.  Of
>> course, they may choose to listen to feedback of WG participants in hope
>> of getting their draft accepted as a WG draft....
>>
>> Lou
>>
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