Re: [CCAMP] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (6866)

stefan vallin <stefan@wallan.se> Mon, 07 March 2022 09:43 UTC

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Date: Mon, 07 Mar 2022 10:42:19 +0100
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8632 (6866)
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Hi!
Thanks for finding this issue! The suggested correction is correct
br Stefan


On Fri, Mar 4, 2022 at 5:47 PM RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8632,
> "A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6866
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>
>
> Section: 6
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>       container older-than {
>         presence "Age specification";
>         description
>           "Matches the 'last-status-change' leaf in the alarm.";
>         choice age-spec {
>
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>       container older-than {
>         presence "Age specification";
>         description
>           "Matches the 'last-changed' leaf in the alarm.";
>         choice age-spec {
>
>
> Notes
> -----
> There is no last-status-change leaf in alarm (and it seems there never
> was).
>
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8632 (draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-09)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management
> Publication Date    : September 2019
> Author(s)           : S. Vallin, M. Bjorklund
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>


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