Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-15

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

From: Daniele Ceccarelli <[e-mail]>
Sent: 06 September 2022 13:33

Hi Tom,

Thanks for the review.

Few comments from my side:

- There isn't that much that we can do about the structure imposed by the TE-topology other than follow the path already established.
- English: unfortunately many of us are non English native speakers, but luckily the RFC editor is extremely helpful here. His/her thorough review usually leads to well written documents.
- References: G.709 is already part of the references.

<tp>

Disagree
In the references I see G.709 March 2020
In the document I see  G.709/Y.1331 February 2016.
I cannot see these as the same.

Tom Petch

Thanks
Daniele

> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom petch <[e-mail]>
> Sent: Monday, 5 September 2022 13:02
> From: CCAMP <[e-mail]> on behalf of Italo Busi
> <Italo.Busi=[e-mail]>
> Sent: 05 September 2022 07:35
>
> Hi Daniele, Fatai,
>
> As co-author, I think the draft is now ready for publication
>
> <tp>
> Mmm that's a challenge.
>
> Indeed it is a challenge to review for the usual reasons, the structure imposed by
> te-topology, the imports, the uses, the many changes in its history  and so on.  I
> tried to match it up with RFC8795 s.6 and failed; I may try again in the next week
> or two.
>
> The English I find flaky, as in mismatch of singular and plural and in some unusual
> spellings  'Costant Bit Rate' or with 'The client-facing is an indicator' or 'support-
> client-signal' for 'supported..'
>
> More concretely
> G.709/Y.1331
> should be in the I-D references IMO.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> Thanks, Italo
>
> From: Daniele Ceccarelli <[e-mail]>
> Sent: lunedì 22 agosto 2022 21:00
> To: [e-mail]
> Subject: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-15
>
> CCAMP,
>
> the IPR declaration collection has been successfully completed and we can move
> to the next step together with draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types.
>
> This starts a 2 weeks working group last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang-
> 15 The last call ends on Monday September 5th. Please send you comments to
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> All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been collected and
> can be found in the history of the document:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang/history/
> Please note that no IPR was disclosed against this draft.
>
> If interested, please volunteer to be the shepherd of the draft (authors
> excluded).
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>
>
>
> Thanks
>
> Daniele & Fatai