Re: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22.txt

Fixes for nits, regrettably also including the same ones you just
fixed in 69: https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/70

Updates that I _think_ fix the weird figure text? I'm not certain this
is the best way to do it, but the existing way looks odd. Look at the
diff linked earlier and check out the figure titles.
https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/71

The much-belated text I promised a while back on 6570:
https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/72

On Mon, Nov 8, 2021 at 7:55 PM Phil Sorber <sorber@apache.org> wrote:
>
> https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/69
>
> On Sat, Nov 6, 2021 at 10:02 PM Kevin Ma <kevin.j.ma.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Phil,
>>
>>   Thanks for getting the updated draft out.  A couple typos/nits:
>>
>>   - section 2.1.10: "for example in" -> "for example, in"
>>   - section 3.2.1: "MAY bt" -> "MAY be"
>>   - section 4: "after and access" -> "after an access"
>>   - section 4.4: remove "against the key issuer with"
>>   - section 5.2: "Sigbned" -> "Signed"
>>
>> --  Kevin J. Ma
>>
>>
>> On Mon, Oct 25, 2021 at 7:12 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks Interconnection WG of the IETF.
>>>
>>>         Title           : URI Signing for Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI)
>>>         Authors         : Ray van Brandenburg
>>>                           Kent Leung
>>>                           Phil Sorber
>>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22.txt
>>>         Pages           : 42
>>>         Date            : 2021-10-25
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>    This document describes how the concept of URI Signing supports the
>>>    content access control requirements of Content Delivery Network
>>>    Interconnection (CDNI) and proposes a URI Signing method as a JSON
>>>    Web Token (JWT) profile.
>>>
>>>    The proposed URI Signing method specifies the information needed to
>>>    be included in the URI to transmit the signed JWT, as well as the
>>>    claims needed by the signed JWT to authorize a User Agent (UA).  The
>>>    mechanism described can be used both in CDNI and single Content
>>>    Delivery Network (CDN) scenarios.
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing/
>>>
>>> There is also an htmlized version available at:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22
>>>
>>>
>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>
>>>
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