Re: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22.txt

Thanks, I merged two of these, but I think we should have a little more
time to think on #72 before we merge it, just because it's been so debated
and I don't want to keep changing it.

On Tue, Nov 9, 2021 at 1:01 AM Chris Lemmons <alficles@gmail.com> wrote:

> Fixes for nits, regrettably also including the same ones you just
> fixed in 69: https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/70
>
> Updates that I _think_ fix the weird figure text? I'm not certain this
> is the best way to do it, but the existing way looks odd. Look at the
> diff linked earlier and check out the figure titles.
> https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/71
>
> The much-belated text I promised a while back on 6570:
> https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/72
>
> On Mon, Nov 8, 2021 at 7:55 PM Phil Sorber <sorber@apache.org> wrote:
> >
> > https://github.com/PSUdaemon/URISigningSpec/pull/69
> >
> > On Sat, Nov 6, 2021 at 10:02 PM Kevin Ma <kevin.j.ma.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> Hi Phil,
> >>
> >>   Thanks for getting the updated draft out.  A couple typos/nits:
> >>
> >>   - section 2.1.10: "for example in" -> "for example, in"
> >>   - section 3.2.1: "MAY bt" -> "MAY be"
> >>   - section 4: "after and access" -> "after an access"
> >>   - section 4.4: remove "against the key issuer with"
> >>   - section 5.2: "Sigbned" -> "Signed"
> >>
> >> --  Kevin J. Ma
> >>
> >>
> >> On Mon, Oct 25, 2021 at 7:12 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >>> This draft is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks
> Interconnection WG of the IETF.
> >>>
> >>>         Title           : URI Signing for Content Delivery Network
> Interconnection (CDNI)
> >>>         Authors         : Ray van Brandenburg
> >>>                           Kent Leung
> >>>                           Phil Sorber
> >>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22.txt
> >>>         Pages           : 42
> >>>         Date            : 2021-10-25
> >>>
> >>> Abstract:
> >>>    This document describes how the concept of URI Signing supports the
> >>>    content access control requirements of Content Delivery Network
> >>>    Interconnection (CDNI) and proposes a URI Signing method as a JSON
> >>>    Web Token (JWT) profile.
> >>>
> >>>    The proposed URI Signing method specifies the information needed to
> >>>    be included in the URI to transmit the signed JWT, as well as the
> >>>    claims needed by the signed JWT to authorize a User Agent (UA).  The
> >>>    mechanism described can be used both in CDNI and single Content
> >>>    Delivery Network (CDN) scenarios.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing/
> >>>
> >>> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22
> >>>
> >>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> >>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >>>
> >>>
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