Re: [CDNi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22.txt

Hi Phil,

  Thanks for getting the updated draft out.  A couple typos/nits:

  - section 2.1.10: "for example in" -> "for example, in"
  - section 3.2.1: "MAY bt" -> "MAY be"
  - section 4: "after and access" -> "after an access"
  - section 4.4: remove "against the key issuer with"
  - section 5.2: "Sigbned" -> "Signed"

--  Kevin J. Ma

On Mon, Oct 25, 2021 at 7:12 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks Interconnection
> WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : URI Signing for Content Delivery Network
> Interconnection (CDNI)
>         Authors         : Ray van Brandenburg
>                           Kent Leung
>                           Phil Sorber
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22.txt
>         Pages           : 42
>         Date            : 2021-10-25
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes how the concept of URI Signing supports the
>    content access control requirements of Content Delivery Network
>    Interconnection (CDNI) and proposes a URI Signing method as a JSON
>    Web Token (JWT) profile.
>
>    The proposed URI Signing method specifies the information needed to
>    be included in the URI to transmit the signed JWT, as well as the
>    claims needed by the signed JWT to authorize a User Agent (UA).  The
>    mechanism described can be used both in CDNI and single Content
>    Delivery Network (CDN) scenarios.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-22
>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>
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