Re: [CDNi] [E] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types-02.txt

["Mishra, Sanjay" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Kevin - Thank you. Greatly appreciate it.

Thanks
Sanjay

On Sun, Oct 23, 2022 at 5:32 PM Kevin Ma <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi Sanjay/Nir,
>
>   The updates in v3 and v4 look good.  I will proceed with the shepherd
> writeup.
>
> thanx!
>
> --  Kevin J. Ma
>
> On Wed, Sep 28, 2022 at 4:52 PM Mishra, Sanjay <[e-mail]>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi Kevin - Sorry for the delayed response. Thank you for your comments.
>> Have just submitted v3 incorporating your comments and some additional
>> updates to be consistent when referring to footprint Type vs footprint
>> object. Lastly, also  updated new URLs for references to Streaming Video
>> Technology Alliance (SVTA).
>>
>> Thanks
>> Sanjay
>>
>> On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 2:43 PM Kevin Ma <[e-mail]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Sanjay/Nir,
>>>
>>>   Thanks for the updates.  I have 3 additional nits below.  Otherwise, I
>>> think it looks good and I will submit the shepherd writeup shortly.
>>>
>>> Jensen,
>>>
>>>   Would you be able to do a quick review of sections 3 and 4.2, just to
>>> make sure the ALTO registration looks ok?
>>>
>>> thanx!
>>>
>>> nits:
>>>
>>> section 2.1:
>>> - "is define" -> "is defined"
>>>
>>> section 2.2.2:
>>> - "of type \"footprint union\"." -> "of type \"footprint union\"
>>> combining both IPv4 and IPv6 client addresses." ?
>>>
>>> section 4.1:
>>> - "separator" -> "hyphen" ?
>>>
>>>
>>> On Tue, Aug 9, 2022 at 6:12 PM Mishra, Sanjay <sanjay.mishra=
>>> [e-mail]> wrote:
>>>
>>>> The updated drafts picked up comments from Kevin plus new
>>>> subsections in Sec 3 referencing RFC 9241 describing ALTO Property Map
>>>> Service Entity. Also added sec 4.2 for registering subdivsioncode as a
>>>> new ALTO Entity Domain Types.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks
>>>> Sanjay
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Mon, Aug 8, 2022 at 3:57 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>>>> directories.
>>>>> This draft is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks
>>>>> Interconnection WG of the IETF.
>>>>>
>>>>>         Title           : Content Delivery Network Interconnection
>>>>> (CDNI) Footprint Types: Subdivision Code and Union
>>>>>         Authors         : Nir B. Sopher
>>>>>                           Sanjay Mishra
>>>>>   Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types-02.txt
>>>>>   Pages           : 12
>>>>>   Date            : 2022-08-08
>>>>>
>>>>> Abstract:
>>>>>    Open Caching architecture is a use case of Content Delivery Networks
>>>>>    Interconnection (CDNI) in which the commercial Content Delivery
>>>>>    Network (CDN) is the upstream CDN (uCDN) and the ISP caching layer
>>>>>    serves as the downstream CDN (dCDN).  This document supplements the
>>>>>    CDNI Metadata Footprint Types defined in RFC 8006.  The Footprint
>>>>>    Types defined in this document can be used for Footprint objects as
>>>>>    part of the Metadata interface (MI) defined in RFC 8006 or the
>>>>>    Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI) defined in
>>>>> RFC
>>>>>    8008.  The document also updates RFC 9241 with relevant ALTO entity
>>>>>    domain types.  The defined Footprint Types are derived from
>>>>>    requirements raised by Open Caching but are also applicable to CDNI
>>>>>    use cases in general.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>>>
>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dcdni-2Dadditional-2Dfootprint-2Dtypes_&d=DwICAg&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=2HV01_gQJ6PylwgZddh17BBBA5ZJ6ij6ovM8hEDzSIUIA3MvE5Kdf76yaObeIfaZ&s=7EBkfDkqHdsjGy2lbji4_DKlhJYn1uQOEosJkz56W94&e=
>>>>>
>>>>> There is also an htmlized version available at:
>>>>>
>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_html_draft-2Dietf-2Dcdni-2Dadditional-2Dfootprint-2Dtypes-2D02&d=DwICAg&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=2HV01_gQJ6PylwgZddh17BBBA5ZJ6ij6ovM8hEDzSIUIA3MvE5Kdf76yaObeIfaZ&s=8ervgXj4I80pROkbBquPwWBuzW9dRBBpDr8y5TNeKBU&e=
>>>>>
>>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>>>
>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_rfcdiff-3Furl2-3Ddraft-2Dietf-2Dcdni-2Dadditional-2Dfootprint-2Dtypes-2D02&d=DwICAg&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=2HV01_gQJ6PylwgZddh17BBBA5ZJ6ij6ovM8hEDzSIUIA3MvE5Kdf76yaObeIfaZ&s=Ipi2hDmUuEqE3n36bw2DT7DX7zTzffBQiwJL6vIYswE&e=
>>>>>
>>>>>
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>>>>>
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