Re: [CDNi] [E] I-D Action: draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types-02.txt

Hi Sanjay/Nir,

  The updates in v3 and v4 look good.  I will proceed with the shepherd
writeup.

thanx!

--  Kevin J. Ma

On Wed, Sep 28, 2022 at 4:52 PM Mishra, Sanjay <sanjay.mishra@verizon.com>
wrote:

> Hi Kevin - Sorry for the delayed response. Thank you for your comments.
> Have just submitted v3 incorporating your comments and some additional
> updates to be consistent when referring to footprint Type vs footprint
> object. Lastly, also  updated new URLs for references to Streaming Video
> Technology Alliance (SVTA).
>
> Thanks
> Sanjay
>
> On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 2:43 PM Kevin Ma <kevin.j.ma.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi Sanjay/Nir,
>>
>>   Thanks for the updates.  I have 3 additional nits below.  Otherwise, I
>> think it looks good and I will submit the shepherd writeup shortly.
>>
>> Jensen,
>>
>>   Would you be able to do a quick review of sections 3 and 4.2, just to
>> make sure the ALTO registration looks ok?
>>
>> thanx!
>>
>> nits:
>>
>> section 2.1:
>> - "is define" -> "is defined"
>>
>> section 2.2.2:
>> - "of type \"footprint union\"." -> "of type \"footprint union\"
>> combining both IPv4 and IPv6 client addresses." ?
>>
>> section 4.1:
>> - "separator" -> "hyphen" ?
>>
>>
>> On Tue, Aug 9, 2022 at 6:12 PM Mishra, Sanjay <sanjay.mishra=
>> 40verizon.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>>> The updated drafts picked up comments from Kevin plus new subsections in
>>> Sec 3 referencing RFC 9241 describing ALTO Property Map Service Entity.
>>> Also added sec 4.2 for registering subdivsioncode as a new ALTO Entity
>>> Domain Types.
>>>
>>> Thanks
>>> Sanjay
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On Mon, Aug 8, 2022 at 3:57 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>>>
>>>>
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>>> directories.
>>>> This draft is a work item of the Content Delivery Networks
>>>> Interconnection WG of the IETF.
>>>>
>>>>         Title           : Content Delivery Network Interconnection
>>>> (CDNI) Footprint Types: Subdivision Code and Union
>>>>         Authors         : Nir B. Sopher
>>>>                           Sanjay Mishra
>>>>   Filename        : draft-ietf-cdni-additional-footprint-types-02.txt
>>>>   Pages           : 12
>>>>   Date            : 2022-08-08
>>>>
>>>> Abstract:
>>>>    Open Caching architecture is a use case of Content Delivery Networks
>>>>    Interconnection (CDNI) in which the commercial Content Delivery
>>>>    Network (CDN) is the upstream CDN (uCDN) and the ISP caching layer
>>>>    serves as the downstream CDN (dCDN).  This document supplements the
>>>>    CDNI Metadata Footprint Types defined in RFC 8006.  The Footprint
>>>>    Types defined in this document can be used for Footprint objects as
>>>>    part of the Metadata interface (MI) defined in RFC 8006 or the
>>>>    Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI) defined in RFC
>>>>    8008.  The document also updates RFC 9241 with relevant ALTO entity
>>>>    domain types.  The defined Footprint Types are derived from
>>>>    requirements raised by Open Caching but are also applicable to CDNI
>>>>    use cases in general.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>>
>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dcdni-2Dadditional-2Dfootprint-2Dtypes_&d=DwICAg&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=2HV01_gQJ6PylwgZddh17BBBA5ZJ6ij6ovM8hEDzSIUIA3MvE5Kdf76yaObeIfaZ&s=7EBkfDkqHdsjGy2lbji4_DKlhJYn1uQOEosJkz56W94&e=
>>>>
>>>> There is also an htmlized version available at:
>>>>
>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_html_draft-2Dietf-2Dcdni-2Dadditional-2Dfootprint-2Dtypes-2D02&d=DwICAg&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=2HV01_gQJ6PylwgZddh17BBBA5ZJ6ij6ovM8hEDzSIUIA3MvE5Kdf76yaObeIfaZ&s=8ervgXj4I80pROkbBquPwWBuzW9dRBBpDr8y5TNeKBU&e=
>>>>
>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>>
>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_rfcdiff-3Furl2-3Ddraft-2Dietf-2Dcdni-2Dadditional-2Dfootprint-2Dtypes-2D02&d=DwICAg&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=2HV01_gQJ6PylwgZddh17BBBA5ZJ6ij6ovM8hEDzSIUIA3MvE5Kdf76yaObeIfaZ&s=Ipi2hDmUuEqE3n36bw2DT7DX7zTzffBQiwJL6vIYswE&e=
>>>>
>>>>
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>>>>
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