[Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 24 September 2020 02:28 UTC

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Date: Wed, 23 Sep 2020 19:28:19 -0700
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Subject: [Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Glad to see this work finishing up.

I think it would be better if each figure were explained in the text (e.g.,
"..., as shown in Figure 9"), or if the figure numbers were dropped.

[Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ie… Alissa Cooper via Datatracker
Re: [Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draf… Michael Richardson
Re: [Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draf… Spencer Dawkins at IETF