Re: [Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: (with COMMENT)

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Thu, 24 September 2020 14:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Cellar] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-cellar-ffv1-17: (with COMMENT)
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Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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    > COMMENT:
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    > Glad to see this work finishing up.

    > I think it would be better if each figure were explained in the text (e.g.,
    > "..., as shown in Figure 9"), or if the figure numbers were dropped.

It was the topic of Tuesday's virtual interim.
I think that the section will get rewritten.

The notation takes a bit of getting used, but it is still a bit difficult.
It's obvious to people who already wrote code, but much less obvious to those
who are trying to write code.

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