[Curdle] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-19: (with COMMENT)

[Martin Duke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-19: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Two nits:

(1.1) this is optional, but

s/man in the middle/on-path attacker

Or other suitable synonym

(3.1.1) and (3.1.2) I cannot parse the sentences with the phrase "is a
reasonable hash...", e.g.

SHA2-256 is a reasonable hash in both the KDF and integrity in both gss and
non-gss uses of curve25519 key exchange methods.

Can you reword?