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Re: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)

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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

Many thanks for your review. I will fix the comment.

Thanks
Bala'zs

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Subject: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 2.2, you define "CW", but the term used in the document is actually "d-CW".  "MPLS-TP", though defined here as well, is not present elsewhere in the document.

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