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Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Tue, 22 October 2019 13:27 UTC

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To: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "Grossman, Ethan A." <eagros@dolby.com>, "detnet@ietf.org" <detnet@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02
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Hi,

     I've made some comments on the pull, the one substantive (not 
editorial) comment relate to a sentence being dropped that I can't 
really trace back to on-list discussion.  Please see 
https://github.com/detnet-wg/data-plane-drafts/pull/55 for the specifics.

Lou

(as contributor)

On 10/11/2019 2:31 PM, Balázs Varga A wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> I have resolved the comments (many thanks!) of EthanG and DavidB.
>
> Ethan’s comments (01.10):
>
> - resolutions as per my email on 03.10 on the list. Most accepted as is.
>
> David’s comments (04.10):
>
> - all comments accepted.
>
> I have uploaded the new “xml” to github. See changes here:
>
> https://github.com/detnet-wg/data-plane-drafts/pull/55/files
>
> Cheers
>
> Bala’zs
>
> *From:* detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of *Grossman, Ethan A.
> *Sent:* Tuesday, September 24, 2019 12:38 AM
> *To:* detnet@ietf.org
> *Subject:* [Detnet] WG Last Call: 
> draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02
>
> All,
>
> This starts a two-week working group last call for 
> draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02.
>
> The working group last call ends on Monday October 7. Please send your 
> comments to the working group mailing list.
>
> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it 
> is ready for publication", are welcome!
>
> This is useful and important, even from authors.
>
> Thank you,
>
> Ethan Grossman, Document Shepherd
>
>
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