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Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> Tue, 22 October 2019 15:37 UTC

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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>, Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "Grossman, Ethan A." <eagros@dolby.com>, "detnet@ietf.org" <detnet@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02
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Hi Lou,
Thanks for the review. I have replied to your comments.
I will update the branch Thursday if no other comments from the list.
Cheers
Bala'zs

From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Lou Berger
Sent: Tuesday, October 22, 2019 3:27 PM
To: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; Grossman, Ethan A. <eagros@dolby.com>; detnet@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02


Hi,

    I've made some comments on the pull, the one substantive (not editorial) comment relate to a sentence being dropped that I can't really trace back to on-list discussion.  Please see https://github.com/detnet-wg/data-plane-drafts/pull/55<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=b00bd881-ec81fa68-b00b981a-0cc47ad93e2e-6b61ca7eae1e5f30&q=1&e=19b5c1f8-f0d0-4ca3-b1a2-4b7f1cf22c57&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fdetnet-wg%2Fdata-plane-drafts%2Fpull%2F55> for the specifics.

Lou

(as contributor)
On 10/11/2019 2:31 PM, Balázs Varga A wrote:
Hi,

I have resolved the comments (many thanks!) of EthanG and DavidB.
Ethan's comments (01.10):
- resolutions as per my email on 03.10 on the list. Most accepted as is.
David's comments (04.10):
- all comments accepted.

I have uploaded the new "xml" to github. See changes here:
https://github.com/detnet-wg/data-plane-drafts/pull/55/files<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=07fb4f7c-5b716d95-07fb0fe7-0cc47ad93e2e-64fd774471411658&q=1&e=19b5c1f8-f0d0-4ca3-b1a2-4b7f1cf22c57&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fdetnet-wg%2Fdata-plane-drafts%2Fpull%2F55%2Ffiles>

Cheers
Bala'zs


From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org><mailto:detnet-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Grossman, Ethan A.
Sent: Tuesday, September 24, 2019 12:38 AM
To: detnet@ietf.org<mailto:detnet@ietf.org>
Subject: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02


All,



This starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02.



The working group last call ends on Monday October 7. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.



Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!

This is useful and important, even from authors.



Thank you,

Ethan Grossman, Document Shepherd




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