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Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> Fri, 11 October 2019 18:31 UTC

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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: "Grossman, Ethan A." <eagros@dolby.com>, "detnet@ietf.org" <detnet@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02
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Hi,

I have resolved the comments (many thanks!) of EthanG and DavidB.
Ethan's comments (01.10):
- resolutions as per my email on 03.10 on the list. Most accepted as is.
David's comments (04.10):
- all comments accepted.

I have uploaded the new "xml" to github. See changes here:
https://github.com/detnet-wg/data-plane-drafts/pull/55/files

Cheers
Bala'zs


From: detnet <detnet-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Grossman, Ethan A.
Sent: Tuesday, September 24, 2019 12:38 AM
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Subject: [Detnet] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02


All,



This starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-02.



The working group last call ends on Monday October 7. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.



Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!

This is useful and important, even from authors.



Thank you,

Ethan Grossman, Document Shepherd

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