[dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 15 December 2021 06:57 UTC

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DISCUSS:
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This should be easy to resolve, but we have to ask as it's pretty important:

Question 7 of the shepherd writeup, about the authors and BCP 78/79, appears
not to have been answered.  Were these declarations made?


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COMMENT:
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I suggest breaking Section 6 into two subsections, one for each batch of
registry operations.

A possibly ignorant question about YANG modules: Since RFCs 3319 and 8987 are
referenced from within the module itself, shouldn't they be normative
references?