[dhcwg] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt

Qi Sun <sunqi.csnet.thu@gmail.com> Mon, 16 December 2013 03:30 UTC

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Dear all,

We have updated the draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg. Major changes are: 

1) Update the Sec 3 (Problem Statement)
2) Rename the Sec 4.1 to "A Valid Message for Constructing a New Relay-forward Message" to avoid the confusion about what 'valid' is for.
3) Reword the definition to the 'valid' message and the subsequent paragraph about unknown messages targeting at the relay agent.
4) Choose "toward" among "toward/towards/to" when describing the relaying direction.
5) Use the pre-RFC5378 boilerplate.
6) Correct some nits.

Thanks a lot for your inputs during the WGLC. 

Best Regards,
Qi


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> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Date: 2013年12月16日 上午11时25分37秒格林尼治标准时间+0800
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> Subject: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title           : Handling Unknown DHCPv6 Messages
> 	Author(s)       : Yong Cui
>                          Qi Sun
>                          Ted Lemon
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt
> 	Pages           : 6
> 	Date            : 2013-12-15
> 
> Abstract:
>   DHCPv6 is not specific about handling messages with unknown types.
>   This memo describes the problems and defines how a DHCPv6 server,
>   client or relay agent should behave when receiving unknown DHCPv6
>   messages.  This document updates RFC3315.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg
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