[DNSOP] AD review of draft-ietf-dnsop-7706bis-07

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

I am handling this document as responsible AD because Warren, who would
otherwise do it, is <strike>irresponsible</strike> an author of the
document.

I have only two comments, below, that are total nits, and I will request
last call as soon as I send this message.  Nice work, as always, Warren and
Paul.

Barry

— Section 1.2 —
It’s a small thing, but please use the BCP 14 boilerplate from RFC 8174
exactly (you left out “NOT RECOMMENDED” here).

— Section 4 —

   As stated in Section 1, this design explicitly only allows the local
   copy of the root zone information to be available only from resolvers

Nit: you don’t need both “only”s.  I suggest removing the first one.