Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-02.txt

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Thu, 30 March 2017 20:00 UTC

Return-Path: <rharolde@umich.edu>
X-Original-To: dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5AE82129438 for <dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 30 Mar 2017 13:00:29 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=umich.edu
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id Yl9mC19alNTX for <dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 30 Mar 2017 13:00:26 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-yb0-x233.google.com (mail-yb0-x233.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4002:c09::233]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id B2C45126B72 for <dnsop@ietf.org>; Thu, 30 Mar 2017 13:00:26 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-yb0-x233.google.com with SMTP id m133so11107034ybb.1 for <dnsop@ietf.org>; Thu, 30 Mar 2017 13:00:26 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=umich.edu; s=google-2016-06-03; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to; bh=y9eKnkkC0DTOI66mNBM/3ojlrU67g4OUHNQNTk/1Xfs=; b=L/zpos9juRRDVs4TUoxqKzjPOuQqCyS2DCALjTEjgERxbw5ubX9N7Di0Uyl1As//D7 8LWglOXVcUMcmjH8q1gDtz3w8Eb0pPTcXxkz6O5ZacTCZ3gjIKVxCi0I2OQ1/aeuRvnb hxees5cHy74epkq09eZU6J9KdgxzcL2ihEOO5v9qZ5HW5DGvznEWkoc/ybrCKSOw+blK e5+jrKj48XxKvFrvPkTVoAQYALiOZbUGayhlTofLaIN9GHZZ+wdPnhZIizL5rDEjEobZ gHKQE9ljrKU5+OUrqetVjlzybgFRm/DISmavPoN6IoSXCPmayrhYLTfrKTlbP3s5GGSC x/nA==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date :message-id:subject:to; bh=y9eKnkkC0DTOI66mNBM/3ojlrU67g4OUHNQNTk/1Xfs=; b=uYuIHphUWuIWEWRgYImi1Oak/OFj0hoP/7eAGS9TNAIEtXoG1L6sFl2e0yA2Zb0SfC H+TX0fDVHf6X0VxNcyyKUXtQECqC5i7zast/atDFd4nYwDpAWVEnF8p7Oj+QPQIDiWTV fhaSsJfQGoBWDWlRVKk9alE05oGGZM5fUD6EhuPCOWonbvSCZRIpI+mS176akalq9NQI eJ7n0XjW18AFhnxeDfsbo9CC3QMwIXs7YQqRl4U2hYX8ROBAM4NVaDOU5d52ZXiune9z vQ/aLC9ynADBQuHY8xEJ3X0x5z8+pnAoUy/eMaAvL3q0jId+R7cOafWePXBURkL5WPMK 5vkg==
X-Gm-Message-State: AFeK/H27hqSjkBIR8GFtagpM0mjSydpt8lCOqMANga4XLlIvcgR+g51N6fFWlmm/XdAiuPk3uZ34VfQgUMEnrlQH
X-Received: by 10.37.244.69 with SMTP id p5mr1238582ybe.95.1490904025473; Thu, 30 Mar 2017 13:00:25 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Received: by 10.129.109.134 with HTTP; Thu, 30 Mar 2017 13:00:25 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <149080054550.26806.17675916795295413492@ietfa.amsl.com>
References: <149080054550.26806.17675916795295413492@ietfa.amsl.com>
From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2017 16:00:25 -0400
Message-ID: <CA+nkc8AKAW-5cS_oDGv2fLmaMX9Z1WgRfkV1bX5KLq+nYozN9w@mail.gmail.com>
To: IETF DNSOP WG <dnsop@ietf.org>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=f403045db026d55079054bf82434
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/nMMvb2pHOPXaoZTk53_c0U2J2DE>
Subject: Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-02.txt
X-BeenThere: dnsop@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
Precedence: list
List-Id: IETF DNSOP WG mailing list <dnsop.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/dnsop>, <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/dnsop/>
List-Post: <mailto:dnsop@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop>, <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 30 Mar 2017 20:00:29 -0000

On Wed, Mar 29, 2017 at 11:15 AM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : DNS Scoped Data Through Global '_Underscore'
> Naming of Attribute Leaves
>         Author          : Dave Crocker
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-02.txt
>         Pages           : 13
>         Date            : 2017-03-29
>
> Abstract:
>    Formally, any DNS "RR" may occur for any domain name.  However some
>    services have defined an operational convention that applies to DNS
>    leaf nodes that have a reserved node name, beginning with an
>    underscore.  The underscore construct is used to define a semantic
>    scope for DNS records that are associated with the parent domain.
>    This specification explores the nature of this DNS usage and defines
>    the "DNS Global Underscore Scoped Entry Registry" registry with IANA.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-02
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-02
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-02
>
>

Near end of section 1:

"underscore-based names that are farther down the
hierarchy is handled within the scope of the highest-level
 _underscore name."

Change "is" to "are"

-- 
Bob Harold