[dnssd] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 29 November 2017 23:29 UTC

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Subject: [dnssd] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Substantive comments:

I support Warren's almost-discuss about non-LDH characters.

Editorial Comments:

- Abstract: It would be helpful to say this document defines a proxy in the
abstract.

-3: The draft contains multiple instances of lower-case "should". If that is
intentional, please consider using the boilerplate from 8174.

[dnssd] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf… Ben Campbell