Re: [Doh] WGLC on draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https

Sara Dickinson <sara@sinodun.com> Wed, 02 May 2018 13:23 UTC

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One other last nit/question on this. The WG charts states:

“The primary focus of this working group is to develop a mechanism that
provides confidentiality and connectivity between DNS clients (e.g., operating
system stub resolvers) and recursive resolvers.”

But the definitions in the Terminology are simply ‘DNS API client' and ‘DNS API server’. Much of the discussion of caching and DNSSEC is specific to stup-resolver interactions so I think this needs to be addressed.

I suggest stating the scope clearly in the draft e.g.:

"This document focuses on communication between DNS clients (e.g., operating
system stub resolvers) and recursive resolvers, as per
 the charter of the DOH Working Group at the time of writing.”

Sara.


> On 18 Apr 2018, at 20:07, Ben Schwartz <bemasc@google.com> wrote:
> 
> All,
> This message starts a two week WG Last Call on advancing:
> 
>   Title           : DNS Queries over HTTPS
>   Author          : Paul Hoffman, Patrick McManus
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-07
>   Pages           : 17
>   Date            : 2018-04-11
> 
> as a Standards Track document. The last call will end on May 2, 2018.
> All substantive comments are to be sent to the doh@ietf.org <mailto:doh@ietf.org> list for
> discussions. Editorial comments can be sent to the document editor.
> 
> You can find the latest version of the document here:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-07 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-07>
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