Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06: (with COMMENT)

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Hi Roman, 

Thank you for the review. 

Please see inline. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Roman Danyliw via Datatracker [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Envoyé : lundi 22 juin 2020 23:59
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> Objet : Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-
> control-06: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06: No Objection
> 
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Thanks for responding to the SECDIR review (and thanks to Shawn Emery for
> conducting the review).
> 
> ** Is there a reason why the meta-data header in this document doesn’t note
> this as an update to RFC8782 (especially since it is updating an
> operational
> gap)?

[Med] This is because we don't have any text in RFC8782 that we are updating or modifying.

The use of "Extends/Extended by" defined in draft-kuehlewind-update-tag might be considered here, but we don't have these tags yet. 

> 
> ** Minor editorial nits:
> -- Section 4.1. Editorial.  s/Some time/Sometime/
> 

[Med] Fixed. 

> -- Section 5.1. Recommend against hard-coding the IANA registry URL
> 
> 
[Med] OK, defined a new reference entry to point to this link. An updated version can be seen at:
https://github.com/boucadair/filter-control/blob/master/draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06.txt 

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