Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06: (with COMMENT)

Hi Med!

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> mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
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> To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: dots-chairs@ietf.org; Liang Xia <frank.xialiang@huawei.com>; Valery
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> Subject: Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-
> filter-control-06: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Hi Roman,
> 
> Thank you for the review.
> 
> Please see inline.
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
> 
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Roman Danyliw via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org] Envoyé :
> > lundi 22 juin 2020 23:59 À : The IESG Cc :
> > draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control@ietf.org; dots-chairs@ietf.org;
> > dots@ietf.org; Valery Smyslov; Liang Xia; frank.xialiang@huawei.com
> > Objet : Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-
> > control-06: (with COMMENT)
> >
> > Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> > draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-06: No Objection
> >
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> > COMMENT:
> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> >
> > Thanks for responding to the SECDIR review (and thanks to Shawn Emery
> > for conducting the review).
> >
> > ** Is there a reason why the meta-data header in this document doesn’t
> > note this as an update to RFC8782 (especially since it is updating an
> > operational gap)?
> 
> [Med] This is because we don't have any text in RFC8782 that we are updating
> or modifying.
> 
> The use of "Extends/Extended by" defined in draft-kuehlewind-update-tag
> might be considered here, but we don't have these tags yet.

Fair.  Consider the my comment resolved.  Thanks!

Regards,
Roman

> >
> > ** Minor editorial nits:
> > -- Section 4.1. Editorial.  s/Some time/Sometime/
> >
> 
> [Med] Fixed.
> 
> > -- Section 5.1. Recommend against hard-coding the IANA registry URL
> >
> >
> [Med] OK, defined a new reference entry to point to this link. An updated
> version can be seen at:
> https://github.com/boucadair/filter-control/blob/master/draft-ietf-dots-signal-
> filter-control-06.txt
> 
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