Re: [Dots] Reminder -- WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-18

kaname nishizuka <kaname@nttv6.jp> Tue, 28 August 2018 08:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dots] Reminder -- WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-18
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Hi,

 From a quick review, these are tiny nits though...

Figure 4: DOTS Alias Subtree
<
           |  |     |  +--rw upper-port    inet:port-number
 >
           |  |     |  +--rw upper-port    inet:port-number?

Figure 8: DOTS ACLs Subtree (TCP Match)
<
        |              |     |     +--rw flags-bitmask
 >
        |              |     |     +--rw flags-bitmask?

it is to indicate they are optional.

thanks,
Kaname

On 2018/08/22 7:03, Roman Danyliw wrote:
> Hello!
>
> The WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel ends Tuesday, August 27.  Please provide input on the mailing list by this deadline.
>
> Roman
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Dots [mailto:dots-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Roman Danyliw
>> Sent: Friday, August 10, 2018 4:30 PM
>> To: dots@ietf.org
>> Subject: [Dots] WGLC on draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-18
>>
>> Hello!
>>
>> Consistent with our discussion at the Montreal meeting, we are starting a
>> working group last call (WGLC) for the DOTS Data Channel draft:
>>
>> DOTS Data Channel Specification
>> draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-18
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dots-data-channel-18
>>
>> Please send comments to the DOTS mailing list -- feedback on remaining
>> issues or needed changes; as well as endorsements that this draft is ready.
>>
>> This WGLC will end on August 27, 2018.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Roman
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