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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08

"Gregg Schudel (gschudel)" <gschudel@cisco.com> Wed, 10 July 2013 23:43 UTC

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From: "Gregg Schudel (gschudel)" <gschudel@cisco.com>
To: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>
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On Jul 10, 2013, at 4:04 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
 wrote:

> Thanks for your review, Suresh. Authors, can you fix the example? Thanks.
> 
> Jari
> 
> On Jul 11, 2013, at 1:44 AM, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
>> Hi Jari,
>> I went through the draft and it looks OK. I just had one minor issue
>> with some example math in the draft.
>> 
>> The following math in the Example 3 of lispMapCacheEntry is wrong and
>> needs to get fixed.
>> 
>> 11 - (2 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 4) = 1
>> 
>> I don't think that this should hold the draft up as it is only an
>> example, but it certainly did throw me off when I read it.
>> 


[gs] embarrassing… sorry! there was one-too-many "+ 1" in there.
I'll correct this.

Thank you!



Best regards,
Gregg

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