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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lisp-mib-08

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 10 July 2013 23:04 UTC

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Thanks for your review, Suresh. Authors, can you fix the example? Thanks.

Jari

On Jul 11, 2013, at 1:44 AM, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Hi Jari,
>  I went through the draft and it looks OK. I just had one minor issue
> with some example math in the draft.
> 
> The following math in the Example 3 of lispMapCacheEntry is wrong and
> needs to get fixed.
> 
> 11 - (2 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 1 + 4) = 1
> 
> I don't think that this should hold the draft up as it is only an
> example, but it certainly did throw me off when I read it.
> 
> Thanks
> Suresh
> 
> On 07/10/2013 05:23 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:
>> Miguel,
>> 
>> This draft is finally in IESG plate after you had reviewed it in January. Thank you for the review! I'm planning to ballot a No-Objection. I also noticed that for the IESG review it had been reassigned to Suresh. Suresh, any objections - have you reviewed this version?
>> 
>> Jari
>> 
>

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