Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Mon, 13 February 2012 08:05 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13
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Hi Christer, Thanks for your comments, I agree with most of them. Allow me to answer a couple of issues of disagreements. > - Requirements > -- REQ-4: Isn't this requirement already covered by REQ-3? No. Req-3 claims for a mechanism for the recipient of a message to determine whether the receive message is private or regular. Req-4 claims for the a mechanism to send private messages. > - There is no definition/reference for "roster". Roster is a not a technical term. According to the Merriam-Webster dictionary, there are two entrances for "roster": 1 a : a roll or list of personnel b : such a list giving the order in which a duty is to be performed <a duty roster> c : the persons listed on a roster 2: an itemized list I think the term is clear when we use it in the context of a conference with participants. /Miguel On 11/02/2012 11:13, Christer Holmberg wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-simple-chat-13 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review Date: 12-02.11 > IETF LC End Date: 12-02-06 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: Ready, but some additional text may be needed based on the minor issues. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > > - The second paragraph of section 7.1 says that a NICKNAME request MUST contain a Use-Nickname header, but in the sixth paragraph the inclusion is a SHOULD. > > - It is not clearly indicated whether the Use-Nickname header is allowed for other methods than NICKNAME. > > - Section 8 does not specify whether there are SDP offer/answer considerations/restrictions associated with the new attribute. For example: > -- Must the attribute tokens in an answer be a subset of the tokens in an offer? > -- Can an SDP answer contain an attribute if the offer didn't? > -- If a user sends a new SDP offer within a session, can the token values be modified? What does it mean if the attribute is not present in a new SDP offer? > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > - Sometimes the document talks about "multi-party chat", "multi-party conference", "conference", and "chat room". Would it be possible to use more consistant terminology? > > - Requirements > -- REQ-4: Isn't this requirement already covered by REQ-3? > -- REQ-6: Change "progress" to "duration" or "length". > > - There is no definition/reference for "roster". > > > Regards, > > Christer > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-cha… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple… Miguel A. Garcia
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple… Christer Holmberg